Date: 09/17/18 02:20 pm Title: Chapter 1
Not bad. A few spelling and grammar errors here and there but was still readable. Could have been flushed out a little more is some areas but over all I enjoyed reading it. 8/10.
Author's Response: Thank you. I am dyslexic so I do have problems with spelling so I am sorry for the spelling mistakes. I'm glad you enjoyed it I am work on a know story but not sure when I will be able to upload it