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Reviewer: marie13 Signed starstarstarstarstar Report
Date: 06/14/20 10:42 am Title: Chapter 1

Nice start! I love fun little stories like these. Excited to see what happens next.

(Also, I don't think you need a "sympathetic" alternative storyline. 😂I think Carrie and her daughters are doing a great job 😂)

Author's Response: Thank you for your review. Also the alternate story will be taking a different direction than this story with a twist ending.

Reviewer: Emilee Grace Signed Report
Date: 01/25/20 03:28 am Title: Chapter 1

Sweet little story. I can see why you wished it had happened.

Reviewer: JulieDcd Signed starstarstarstar Report
Date: 10/14/18 12:14 am Title: Chapter 1

This is a wonderful short story. I hope I get to read more of it!

Reviewer: LittlebabyAlex Signed starstarstarstarstar Report
Date: 02/08/18 12:03 pm Title: Chapter 1

hi love your story hope there is more to come

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