Date: 06/14/20 10:42 am Title: Chapter 1
Nice start! I love fun little stories like these. Excited to see what happens next.
(Also, I don't think you need a "sympathetic" alternative storyline. 😂I think Carrie and her daughters are doing a great job 😂)
Author's Response: Thank you for your review. Also the alternate story will be taking a different direction than this story with a twist ending.