Date: 06/17/19 10:02 am Title: Wishing for Wishes
Its really weird how this story has so little reviews despite having such a massive amount of views.
Anyways, fascinating chapter, one of the best! Though I wished the final wish would have a more detailed description, these never get old, believe me.
Author's Response: Thanks! I find the lack of reviews weird as well, and frankly a little frustrating. Reviews like yours are awesome because they give me something to work on (a more detailed wish description) and let me think of ways to improve. It's especially strange that this story has so few reviews because as far as I can tell, it's the story of mine with the most long-term readers.
Date: 06/09/19 02:45 am Title: With Friends Like These...
Ohh... More raunchy fun. Poor genie can't even come around to doing good in all cases, can she? "Your wish is my command... asshole." I'm glad you are continuing to explore this what-if and expand on the main character(s).
Date: 06/07/19 05:35 pm Title: With Friends Like These...
I’m really enjoying the genie’s character arc. She’s becoming quite the righteous force of nature.
Author's Response: I'm happy with how she's turning out, especially since she started out as mostly a vehicle for short wish-gone-wrong stories.
Date: 01/25/19 05:04 pm Title: Cheer Up
We need more intelligence-gain stories in the world. I get why they are relatively uncommon: it is extremely difficult to write for characters smarter than you are.
I think that your approach here, shifting the baseline intelligence down to begin with, is a very good solution to that.
It is certainly easier than the other approach I'm familiar with, which entails spending much more time thinking about the character's actions than the character does (like taking ten minutes to devise an idea that the character comes up with in ten seconds).
Author's Response: I'm happy it turned out well- that was definitely one of the more difficult aspects of this chapter.
Date: 02/11/18 02:57 pm Title: Marital Bliss
Excellent story, with a really creative twist! I'm impressed with how much originality you are bringing to this sub-sub-sub-genre of fiction.
Author's Response: Thank you, keeping this story fresh was a top priority. I didn't want to make a mindless clone of someone else's premise.
Date: 01/20/18 06:20 pm Title: Wishing for Wishes
Just finished chapter 3, loving this 'story' so far! Keep up the good work!
Author's Response: I've gotten a few suggestions that I think I can work into chapters, so there should be a good bit of material to come. Glad you're enjoying!
Date: 01/19/18 04:03 am Title: Eyes On Me
Haha, that was pretty sexy and fun. That teacher sure was one-minded! Glad he got what he wanted. I hope the next episodes are kinda like this, ironic but not vindictive.
Author's Response: Chapter 3 is my personal favorite of the seven or so I've drafted for this story so far. I'll definitely be taking more cues from it for future installments.