Date: 12/07/19 05:02 pm Title: Wishing for Wishes
Ch. 1 - Revisiting in hope of more chapters. Sadly, there are none. In consolation, I re-read Ch. 1 and rediscovered this gem - "“Of course, your imprisonment only starts after you’ve finished sucking my cock.”
... Of course.
Date: 12/04/19 09:22 pm Title: Labor of Love
Well, this chapter was either brilliant or confusing. Or both. I'm not sure what the advantage was for the genie in making Azure the wisher. Or giving Azure her power over men.
And now the wish to set her free. What does that mean? Does she keep some power? Her lamp? Do freed genies get a pension? Is she still a threat to Azure?
Love the cliffhangers. Can't wait for the next chapter.
Date: 11/10/19 08:28 pm Title: Cheer Up
Chapter 10 - Probably one of the nicest transformations I've read.
Author's Response: Thanks! It's definitely one of my best, and flowed onto the page really well. It took basically no editing- I can only hope in vain to write another story so well in my lifetime.
Date: 09/26/19 09:02 am Title: Conflicts of Interest
I'll note that i often continue to read a story after leaving a review and not leave another for a few chapters, only to then make a comment. I've also been reading each and every chapter of this as it has came out, and i really do enjoy this story. I love myself a good magic story, and this hits all the spots!
I cannot wait to see how this plays out!
Date: 06/17/19 10:02 am Title: Wishing for Wishes
Its really weird how this story has so little reviews despite having such a massive amount of views.
Anyways, fascinating chapter, one of the best! Though I wished the final wish would have a more detailed description, these never get old, believe me.
Author's Response: Thanks! I find the lack of reviews weird as well, and frankly a little frustrating. Reviews like yours are awesome because they give me something to work on (a more detailed wish description) and let me think of ways to improve. It's especially strange that this story has so few reviews because as far as I can tell, it's the story of mine with the most long-term readers.
Date: 06/09/19 02:45 am Title: With Friends Like These...
Ohh... More raunchy fun. Poor genie can't even come around to doing good in all cases, can she? "Your wish is my command... asshole." I'm glad you are continuing to explore this what-if and expand on the main character(s).
Date: 06/07/19 05:35 pm Title: With Friends Like These...
I’m really enjoying the genie’s character arc. She’s becoming quite the righteous force of nature.
Author's Response: I'm happy with how she's turning out, especially since she started out as mostly a vehicle for short wish-gone-wrong stories.
Date: 01/25/19 05:04 pm Title: Cheer Up
We need more intelligence-gain stories in the world. I get why they are relatively uncommon: it is extremely difficult to write for characters smarter than you are.
I think that your approach here, shifting the baseline intelligence down to begin with, is a very good solution to that.
It is certainly easier than the other approach I'm familiar with, which entails spending much more time thinking about the character's actions than the character does (like taking ten minutes to devise an idea that the character comes up with in ten seconds).
Author's Response: I'm happy it turned out well- that was definitely one of the more difficult aspects of this chapter.
Date: 02/11/18 02:57 pm Title: Marital Bliss
Excellent story, with a really creative twist! I'm impressed with how much originality you are bringing to this sub-sub-sub-genre of fiction.
Author's Response: Thank you, keeping this story fresh was a top priority. I didn't want to make a mindless clone of someone else's premise.
Date: 01/20/18 06:20 pm Title: Wishing for Wishes
Just finished chapter 3, loving this 'story' so far! Keep up the good work!
Author's Response: I've gotten a few suggestions that I think I can work into chapters, so there should be a good bit of material to come. Glad you're enjoying!
Date: 01/19/18 04:03 am Title: Eyes On Me
Haha, that was pretty sexy and fun. That teacher sure was one-minded! Glad he got what he wanted. I hope the next episodes are kinda like this, ironic but not vindictive.
Author's Response: Chapter 3 is my personal favorite of the seven or so I've drafted for this story so far. I'll definitely be taking more cues from it for future installments.