Date: 04/20/18 05:28 am Title: Chapter 1 Brian
Great story. The ending wasn't bad but it still leaves me wanting more. Any chance you'll be doing a sequel at all?
Author's Response: I don't do sequels any more. I find that when I try, they just get tedious and repetitious. The only sequel I've written that I'm really proud of is Dakota. Anyway, this way you can create whatever you want to happen in your mind.
Date: 04/19/18 02:21 am Title: Chapter 1 Brian
Wow, I honestly had thought I'd submitted a review before this.
I just read the last chapter, not realising that it really was the last chapter. Liked the story a lot. Love that you ended it (thank you) and I do like the ending! Always leave them wanting more. Great job.
Author's Response: Thank you. I think I worked longer on this story than any of my previous ones.
Date: 04/19/18 12:30 am Title: Chapter 1 Brian
Good grief, Casey, a complete story without a single sociopathic moment. Are you losing your touch?
Seriously, a great story which I very much enjoyed. Even if I was looking nervously over my shoulder every other episode for something terrible to happen. 😉
Author's Response: Thank you. See, I'm not a complete sociopath.
Date: 04/15/18 11:16 am Title: Chapter 24 Coming Clean
OMG finally catch up to here and it's been a wonderful ride so far loved every bit of it and to be honest it's really awesome probably one of the best. Hugs and hope you are doing well Casey superstar. 😍😘
Author's Response: Thank you, honey. I'm so glad you like it. I've probably spent more time writing this one than any of my other stories.
Date: 04/04/18 10:47 pm Title: Chapter 22 Surprise from the Past
.......i......ummm........rubs head.....well she went home and it took HIM that long to find out who she was. God.....and.....I was going to say more but I really don't know what to add. She better keep it pig 13 for a little
Author's Response: We'll see.
Date: 03/23/18 07:56 pm Title: Chapter 19 Anticipation
Wow talking about being a slut. I guess that's what she also wants out of her life. Your other chapters good work but this one just made my mind up about her. She a 100% slut in my book now.
Author's Response: Or is it just a phase?
Date: 02/27/18 09:54 am Title: Chapter 13 Hectic Last Semester
I can’t wait to see where you are going in the next chapter! FF seems to easy for you,I know you are going to have a twist.
Author's Response: Thank you. Wait a minute. Did you just call me easy? Well.....
Date: 01/24/18 01:57 am Title: Chapter 7 Dating Tips
I start reading this again even if its not really my thing. I am looking forward though for the first boy encounters Breed has and what might happen.
Author's Response: Coming soon. I hope you like it because I spent a lot of time on this topic.
Date: 01/11/18 01:12 am Title: Chapter 4 The Decision
Believe it or not, Case, I've uploaded two responses before this one and deleted both. I hope you saw neither. They weren't negative, but … they sucked. Your story is cute, though-- as I said earlier-- I thought Brian's surviving mostly intact an accident of that caliber was a little farfetched, but … no matter. The plot feels a bit rushed ... maybe ... I don't know. I'm used to reading (and writing) stories that include a lot more detail in the telling. It’s as if you’re in a hurry to get the story told. Curious to see where you're taking Brian and his decision to be a girl. A decently told story overall, however.
Author's Response: Thank you. I DID decide to truncate the intro and have more detail later.
Date: 01/10/18 11:21 am Title: Chapter 4 The Decision
I will always honestly tell what I think, and I don't like this. It doesn't make any sense. I know why this is written and it is your fantasy, but... a plot should still be logic, no? Imagine you're straight and in HIS position... how would be just take it thaat easily and just chooses a girls name and stuff like that. Seriously? And then like in a MATTER of minutes/hours already uses the pronouns she/her ect pp. This is just nonsense. I wont give a rating because it wouldn't be objective. Same with the hospital "personal"...
Author's Response: Sorry it's not for you, but then we all have our own tastes. You're right about it being my fantasy. All my stories are based on fantasies I have or fantasies I'd like to explore, so obviously some will like them and some won't. Sure I'm pleased when others like them, but if not, then that's ok, too. Thanks for taking the time to write a review.
Date: 01/05/18 10:18 pm Title: Chapter 3 The Choice
Case, you're kidding? Hit by a semi, propelled 15 feet into the air, contact with a car's windshield, another car clipped his legs and tossed him to the road, whereupon yet another car RAN OVER HIM? And he lived? To walk again and be fine for the most part? Case, if you wanted to do in his penis for your story, I know a true story you might have used (as inspiration). Not sure of all the correct details but it goes something like this: A lineman was working up an electric transmission line. His crotch area was pressing up against the metal pole. (The only part of him that sadly acted as a ground.) He touched an overhead wire. The current went harmlessly through his body but unfortunately departed him via his genitalia. There was a great flash which burnt his manhood to a crisp. The rest of him was fine. His privates? Alas, no. (How he was able to pee until new pathways were substituted you got me.) I don't recall how he resolved the situation, but he’d never be a real man ever again. The best he could hope for was an artificial replacement man tool using skin grafts and a pretend semblance of a penis. I doubt he loved any of his choices.
My God, if someone got banged up as bad as Brian did, would he find himself at most living a paraplegic life like Stephen Hawking?
Author's Response: Poetic license, Pablo. I liked the idea of the pinball metaphor. And he had to have enough tissue left to surgically reform. lol
Date: 01/02/18 02:26 pm Title: Chapter 2 The Accident
"I'll be completely honest with you..." But not fair to the rest of us. You're consistent, I'll give you that. This wouldn't matter so much, if I waited till you finished uploading the whole thing. Oh, well. Until whenever I suppose. (It's Lost in Space again. "Tune in next week, same time same channel." Will it take that long? Absence in this case, does NOT make the heart grow fonder. It's a good story though.
Author's Response: Thanks. *laughing*
Date: 12/30/17 08:27 pm Title: Chapter 1 Brian
That wasnt meant in a rude way, it was objective asked. I have changed my rating up 3 stars was maybe too harsh to vote so I will give 5 stars here to make it even. I really liked this intro. Because of several reasons why are hard for me to describe. I read stories like this before though, with a high school or college boy is forced through surgery waking up and they have given him vocal chord change, breasts and a vagina. But then all those stories went totally nuts and illogical, of the former straight boy like being a girl, instead of freaking out and his, yes HIS, life be in ruins. I always wished to read a realistic plot like this, but with the straight teenager go through a struggling "hell", of going back to school, and him, yes HIM, be bullied or worse, seen from boys as a girl, and even flirted with, asked out to a date on a party, where he is grossed out by those things, because he still is himself in his head of course, and he likes girls.
Author's Response: Don't worry, sweetie. It wasn't taken as being rude.
Date: 12/30/17 07:36 am Title: Chapter 1 Brian
This started good, however, I think it will lead to the typical boring story because of "Becomes Only Attracted to Men" unfortunately. I wish you would write something dark again. The last "dark" plot you wrote was in 2014 I think. There are already so many plots like this, high school boy is "forced" though SRS because of a horrible accident, and then loves to be a girl... bla bla bla. Why not risk once for a good, logic plot, and risking a darker scenario? And him NOT liking it...
Author's Response: Gotta write whatever comes to mind. Not sure if the next story I have in mind will be to your liking, but I promise it will have a surprise twist at the end.
Date: 12/30/17 02:15 am Title: Chapter 1 Brian
Great beginning, liked it a lot. I've always had a thing for Juliet. Would have loved to have played her myself. I actually gravitate more to her role than Romeo's. Anyway. Still smarting over no unicorn. Was kind of looking forward to it. (Kidding.) They eat lilies, don't they? (I forget what story that's from.) "There's a unicorn in the garden...." "The unicorn ate a lily." (Don't mind me.)
Author's Response: I was writing the list and my perverse sense of humor reared its ugly (horned) head. http://english.glendale.cc.ca.us/unicorn1.html
Date: 12/29/17 09:50 pm Title: Chapter 1 Brian
Not bad. Chapters need to be a bit longer though and more detail added to his Juliet role---getting ready, his feelings, ect. Less narrative, more dialogue. Good concept, good setting.
Author's Response: Thanks. Since the Juliet role is merely background, I didn't go into much detail. You'll find that later. About the chapters. My chapters are usually determined by two things: the events that occur and how much writing time I have right then. Sometimes on one of the many re-writes, I do juggle them, however.
Date: 12/29/17 02:57 pm Title: Chapter 1 Brian
I think it's great that we're both writing stories about fictitious all-boys schools where our main character is teased for looking like a girl! Ha! Good so far, Casey!
Author's Response: Thanks. Hope you still think it's good after further chapters.