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Reviewer: SwiffSwaff Signed Report
Date: 04/02/18 11:00 am Title: Chapter 1

Hi, some promise here, but just thought I'd point out that you used the word "waitressing" early on in your chapter which made me think your character was female. I was rather confused when I got to the end!

Reviewer: Antacook Signed starstarstarstar Report
Date: 12/29/17 07:44 pm Title: Chapter 1

Wow seems great I'd love to see more

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TG Storytime uses the eFiction engine and Vanilla discussions. Design by J6P.