Date: 01/08/18 04:38 am Title: New Hardware
Can't wait for more!
Author's Response: Thanks for the support! I've been busy with school, so I haven't been able to get time to type up the next chapter, but rest assured it will come. I don't ever want to abandon this story. I've seen too many good stories abandoned, and it's sad when it happens. I am also working on a second story that might get uploaded as well, but like the first one, I may not have the time to type it up right away. I will try and get the next chapter out soon, though.
Date: 12/22/17 10:18 pm Title: Life Has Its Thorns
Ok, I think I might have fixed it. I tend to type in what seems to be book-length paragraphs, so what you see are the actual paragraphs now. If you feel that any of the paragraphs are too long, though, let me know. I'll try and make shorter, more readable paragraphs.
Date: 12/22/17 06:46 pm Title: Life Has Its Thorns
Needs formatting, badly. Make sure to leave an empty line between every paragraph - it's unreadable until that's fixed.
Author's Response: I tried to deal with that one, sorry. I typed up the chapters using Microsoft Word and OneDrive from Outlook, but when I tried to put it in it said that the file type wasn't compatible. Don't worry, I'll try and fix it. Thanks for being the first person to leave a review, though!