Date: 11/20/19 12:40 pm Title: Chapter 1
So awesome to have you back writing! Can't wait to see what devious obstacles the original Mrs. Harris will cook up to keep her body, you just never know with a magical book laying around. This is one of the best chapters yet. Who knows how Mr. Harris will make it up to his wife...maybe a renewal of there vows or fancy dinner.
Date: 11/21/18 05:23 pm Title: Chapter 28
Wow, a threesome, every guy's dream. Not so much for the new Mrs Harris though. Interesting to read from a 'female' point of view. I wonder how she would feel about a 3-way with Allen and Matthew?
If you're looking for ideas to get over writer's block, you could have her get pregnant; or get her body's family involved to reverse the curse or at least stop Michael from torturing her.
Please take all the time you need, I love your writing style. Thanks.
Date: 11/21/18 10:56 am Title: Chapter 28
Hmmmm. Well, I'm definitely thrilled to see you back, but I'm worried about your writer's block. It appears that you created something of a corner for Matthew and Janice's relationship. Lets talk about it!
Date: 08/14/18 08:52 pm Title: Chapter 1
We haven't heard anything about Mrs Harris' family other than the mention of two daughters. And nothing at all of her parents, if they are still alive. Maybe one or all of those women together could be enlisted to help new Mrs Harris to get his old body back, or at least stop the old Mrs Harris from tormenting him. But what's the fun in that?
Date: 08/14/18 08:47 pm Title: Chapter 1
Any chance the new Mrs Harris could become pregnant from all the sex she has been having? Seems like the ultimate humiliation for a 16 year old boy turned middle aged trophy wife. Even better if Allen isn't the father. Just a thought.
Date: 08/07/18 07:57 pm Title: Chapter 1
Loving the story, especially the way you are able to describe the fashions she wears. Not many stories are able to do that like you. Keep it up can't wait for the next chapter.
Author's Response: Thanks for the feedback Scarlett. gad you are enjoying it and hope you will enjoy the next chapters too. Lejla x
Date: 08/07/18 10:16 am Title: Chapter 1
I love this story but I feel like it will never be completed. I would love to see Michael get his life back and enact some revenge on Mrs Harris but I have about given up hope for a continuation of the story.
Author's Response: Hi Brogreenman, I promise you the story will be completed. the next chapter is about 75% done. Its just a little difficult to find the time to get it done and i really dont want to rush it and ruin it. glad you are enjoying it though. Lejla x
Date: 05/31/18 09:12 am Title: Chapter 25
Very nice chapter! I'm starting to have a new appreciation for Mrs Harris the witch. It seems to me that she might have Michael's best interest in mind. Perhaps she is more of a Fairy Godmother than a witch.
I am thinking though. Michael is a mature, adult woman with mature, adult needs. Is Matthew up to the task of providing for her needs both financially and sexually? Mrs Harris has increased and accentuated almost everything about Michael from his lips to his tits. I don't mean to sound paranoid, but what if Mrs. Harris increased Michael's addiction to feminine cigarettes? How would Allan react if he saw his wife smoking three packs of cigarettes per day? He might not like it. What about Matthew? Would he be okay with a mature, gorgeous, chain-smoking cougar? Who knows?
Love your story, Lejla!
Date: 05/30/18 05:16 pm Title: Chapter 25
I haven’t been able to put this story down, despite not being hugely into the humiliation scene. But I think maybe she needs some good luck now as she’s been subject to so much harshness, personally I’d probably have killed myself by now! I think there needs to be a glimmer of hope introduced soon :)
Date: 05/08/18 09:02 am Title: Chapter 24
Good luck with your house move, but your chapters are worth the wait. I love this story so much, and I enjoy the conflict and mental turmoil. I understand how this life-change would be difficult for a sixteen year old boy. It's a shame that he doesn't appreciate the wonderful gift of MILFDOM that Mrs. Harris has bestowed on him at this point in his transition. Hopefully that will change if he meets the right man who can appreciate his age, physical attributes, stunning looks, and sexy cigarette habit.
Author's Response: Hi Sharon, thanks again for your lovely feedback. its very much appreciated, especially from someone whose writing I have enjoyed reading in the past. It is so nice to know that people are enjoying the story. Lejla xx
Date: 04/29/18 03:43 am Title: Chapter 1
I miss your story hope your ok and return soon!
Author's Response: hi, thanks, im fine, ive just been so busy moving house I haven't had a chance to write. I hope to have a new chapter up soon. Im really sorry its taken so long. Lejla x
Date: 04/01/18 10:50 pm Title: Chapter 23
Mature womanhood seems unappreciated by this teenage boy. He doesnt seem to realize how lucky he is. While his friends are wasting their time studying, playing sports and studying, he gets to enjoy wearing panties, bras, smoking like a real woman and satisfying a real man like Allan. His friends would be so jealous if they knew.
Date: 03/31/18 04:47 am Title: Chapter 1
love your story, was getting worried that was it chap 22. also would like more smoking thanx
Author's Response: thanks for the feedback, glad you are enjoying the story. Sorry for the delay with this chapter, i've just been so busy and im in the middle of moving house. hopefully the next chapter won't be too far away. Lejla x
Date: 03/26/18 01:58 am Title: Chapter 1
I made an account for this story. It's perhaps my favorite tf story I've ever read.Keep up the good work! Please make more boy to MILF transformation stories!
As for how I want the story to go... have the new Janice be punished once more, this time mentally which allows him to come to terms with his new life... then make Melissa swap with Allen.
Author's Response: Hi Botmin, thank you so much for your review, it means so much. This is my first attempt at writing fiction, although I do have a few more story outlines I will start working on once I finish this one. Lejla x
Date: 03/18/18 09:39 am Title: Chapter 22
Another beautifully written chapter! Thanks, so much! There is some wonderful conflict in this chapter as well as the ones that proceeded it. Obviously, Michael never wanted to become Ms. Harris. I mean what sixteen year old boy wants to become a beautiful, sexy 48 year old woman with huge knockers, and an appetite for cigarettes and penises? Well...other than myself.
To me, this was an important chapter because Michael got what he wanted- Melissa! However, he quickly realized that Melissa can't give him what he needs. Life would be so much easier for Michael if he could accept his situation and make the best of it. Melissa is an understanding friend, but he needs a friend who can identify with him better. I think he needs an older woman friend who smokes to confide with. His mother would be an excellent choice of friends. Perhaps his mother could give him the guidance he needs to be happy as a chain-smoking, gorgeous, 48 year old woman!
Date: 03/12/18 01:08 am Title: Chapter 22
I hope the bitch gets exactly what she deserves. There had better be a switch. One that is irreversible. Melissa deserves a major reward for sticking up for the real Michael. No screwing around, that bitch deserves the worst. They need help, I'm sure. Just where is it?
Date: 03/03/18 04:02 pm Title: Chapter 21
Alright! Just spent a good part of my day reading the 21 chapters written thus far. I'm usually not into magic, but I'll make an exception in this case. What a terrific story? OMG! I hope the original Michael can find happiness as a middle aged trophy wife with big boobs and a sexy cigarette addiction. For me that, would be my dream come true!
Author's Response: Hi Sharon, thank you so much for your review. I am so happy you are enjoying the story. Hearing that people are enjoying the story gives me a lot of heart and encouragement to keep writing as this is my first attempt at writing . Lejla xx
Date: 03/03/18 12:25 am Title: Chapter 1
Love the story so far, wish she would make the mistake of saying his name wrong when stating what she wants so he gets both options. but if it has any sway i would hope for the lips since you can play with that option more then heels in her day to day live since she is already wearing heels.
Author's Response: thank you for the review and im so glad you are enjoying the story! Lejla x
Date: 03/02/18 09:05 pm Title: Chapter 1
In the end we all know he will get his body back...maybe. Till then I'm loving this story and would move towards bigger lips. Would it be possible to see something along the lines of a renewal wedding? How devious would that be with Melissa as a bridesmaid. So much fun can't wait for the next chapter.
Author's Response: Scarlett have you been peeking at my notes for the direction of this story!!!! hopefully you will enjoy the next few chapters as it builds towards conclusion. Lejla xx
Date: 02/25/18 08:16 am Title: Chapter 20
I am really loving this, but don't forget the smoking aspect! Some of have two turn-on's the transformation and the smoking!
Author's Response: Thanks Sapphire for your feedback, It is an area i Have neglected, but I will put a edit into the last chapter and try and include it more going forward. Im also glad you are enjoying it
Date: 02/18/18 07:56 pm Title: Chapter 1
well since your asking, I'd say there are two ways this could go, the evil Micheal *Mrs Harris* casts a spell onto Melissa instead making her more horny, which causes her issues. also if its just a choice between Bigger breasts or higher sex drive, I'd say that Micheal will go out ask for bigger breasts but Mrs Harris will cast the spell to increase her need for sex instead and then laugh evilly maybe make the breasts bigger too.
Date: 02/13/18 10:36 pm Title: Chapter 1
I find it interesting where your going, I want to see if Melissa knew already and is leading Micheal into a trap, driving him the point he is going to be Mrs Harris forever.... what can I say I like that I idea, also I know she's older but the idea of her not being able to switch back maybe cause she is pregnant from her cheating would be neat too, Also Micheal having to deal with pregnacy would be interesting seeing how her Husband reacts how Micheal now has to beg allen not to leave, maybe allen using that to get her to do more. who knows obviously my mind is pretty messed up
Author's Response: thanks for your review and your ideas. And i love a messed up mind! i've got 2 or 3 different routes planned out for this, as well as the framework for a few other stories too. its just finding the time to write it all up!
Date: 02/07/18 08:34 pm Title: Chapter 1
...finds that "she" can not tell Melissa his real name. This could only mean that "Micheal" has figured out how to use the book? Could this be why he has been so horny, has she already used the book on him again? Maybe to distract him from getting back to there original bodies.
I wouldn't mind seeing more of Mrs. Harris going out and doing social stuff, like maybe a wedding, work party or charity were she is forced to interact, show off her sexy bod and dress in hot sexy things. Keep it up great story so far.
Date: 01/29/18 07:02 pm Title: Chapter 1
Love the story. Early on, Janice demanded that Michael maintain her lifestyle to keep up the ruse. Maybe he should flip the script, and demand she service him afterschool or he cries foul, since he now has to deal with her cravings.
Date: 01/29/18 08:11 am Title: Chapter 1
One of my favourite current stories, keep up the good work. I'm particularly enjoying Michael's internal struggle as he slowly succumbs to the temptations of his horny body. I did spot a couple of typos in the most recent chapter. Danny's musical chest and kitty job.
I am wondering what Micheal is doing for protection? Having lots of unprotected sex has the potential to make his life even more complicated than it is already.
Looking forward to seeing where you take things next
Author's Response: Thanks for the feedback, and Im glad you are enjoying it. Thanks for pointing out the typos. Auto correct isn't always up to the job :-)
Date: 01/17/18 06:45 am Title: Chapter 1
I am loving the story, the evolution of him/her is great and also I like the needs, I wonder if he's starting to enjoy it but can't admit it to herself... and maybe thats why. Either way I am loving this
Author's Response: thanks for the feedback. I think its endure rather than enjoy at the minute :-)
Date: 01/16/18 05:03 pm Title: Chapter 8
What a wonderful and sexy story! Love the inner monologue, trying to resist, as well as the descriptive language for the protagonist's experiences.
Author's Response: Thank you for the feedback, I'm glad you have enjoyed it so far.
Date: 01/16/18 06:57 am Title: Chapter 1
Great story so far. Would love to see the new woman in awkward female public scenarios. E.g maybe convinced to join a gym / yoga class and finds the girl he fancied is in the changing rooms with him - finally sees her naked but cannot do anything about it. Maybe he sees his family out and about again. Plenty of options.
Author's Response: Thanks for the feedback. I think you might see Michael having a few more awkward situations to deal with in the future.