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Reviewer: storylovinggamer Signed starstarstarstarstar Report
Date: 12/20/17 09:41 pm Title: Chapter 4

Awesome! Looking forward to reading the next story when i get the chance.

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Date: 12/20/17 07:26 pm Title: Chapter 2

Awesome so far! The federations troubles with the Syndicates and REX remind me of the song "The Wolfe Tones - General Munroe", because everyone against these adversaries seem to have a rebellious and determined spirit, especially Leslie, which is what the general who was the focus of the song had when he was dragged down to the town square in the early morning to be executed. Sadly, the events in the real world for the general didn't go as well as the success that the federation seem to be having so far. Overall, great story! There is a few things i wasn't overly fond of, but it was still good.

Author's Response: well, no one likes everything in every story, that's a given----I simply write what I like and have the most success that way--Thanks for the review.

Reviewer: Blossom89 Signed starstarstarstarstar Report
Date: 12/16/17 07:00 pm Title: Chapter 4

I'm looking forward to any new stories you have going in this series Marina!! I've seen the start of two different arc's on this story you started years ago but I never got more than the 1st chapter of either.. Thank you for taking your valuable time and talent to entertain us non-writers!!
Blossom

Author's Response: I have completed the THIRD Book in this series too, just recently Which was only half done before.--The Last Frontier3 "The Fifth Vector" Where a Jump malfunction lands Retribution and the crew into a parallel universe where Leslie's Change never happened, but back in time a bit before the bomb had been set off---She has to somehow team up with her counterpart to prevent the bombing that killed her wife and son---IF she can convince the other Captain Webber that she is who she claims to be and not Kora Horst carrying out some elaborate Syndicate plot. Webber gets to see her Son and Wife alive again, but cannot become a part of her family any more. Her counterpart gives Leslie a disturbing "gift".

Reviewer: Blossom89 Signed starstarstarstarstar Report
Date: 12/16/17 02:42 pm Title: Chapter 1

I've always loved Marina's space saga's! Exciting, well written, and just an all round great tale! I hope to see more of Leslie Webber's adventures!

Author's Response: Thanks, I should soon have the rest of this Book 2 up---And stay tuned for the completed version of "The Fifth Vector" Where Webber and the crew accidently zap into a parallel universe where Leslie's change never happened and they have an , at first, not too friendly encounter with their former selves.---And Leslie must convince them to help her stop the bombing that killed Webber's wife and Son in her own universe.

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