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Reviewer: jaimehlers Signed starstarstarstar Report
Date: 04/19/18 01:42 am Title: Prologue: First day is always exciting and tiresome

I'd really like to see more of it.

Author's Response: Kinda forgotten I was leaving the draft of next chapter half-finished. That shouldn't take too long.

Reviewer: storylovinggamer Signed starstarstarstar Report
Date: 12/09/17 01:09 am Title: Prologue: First day is always exciting and tiresome

Thats quite a funky story!

Author's Response: Speak for all of my stories, yeah?

Reviewer: Lilchelly Signed starstarstarstarstar Report
Date: 12/01/17 05:47 pm Title: Chapter 1: Frank Pepper, the guy responsible for everything

Hypnotizing your body to physically change you, not sure that's possible but apparently this kid has errr had super powers. Well kinda your own fault kid especially for what you did to that girl. If he gets out of this maybe he'll learn to respect people better.

Author's Response: Yeah, but he didn't exactly take credit for anything though. He got too into the character he was posing as and he studied to the point of losing his own mind without him noticing. That's why you should never underestimate yourself or else you will turn into a different person and you won't be happy!

Reviewer: BLT Signed starstarstarstar Report
Date: 11/24/17 02:14 pm Title: Prologue: First day is always exciting and tiresome

I'm confused 😅

Author's Response: As it was meant to be, BLT. I would be losing my mind if you weren't.

Reviewer: CD_boy Signed starstarstarstar Report
Date: 11/21/17 07:36 pm Title: Prologue: First day is always exciting and tiresome

Interesting start, can't wait to understand what is going on.

Author's Response: My bad for leaving it short, but the next chap should clear all the cloud. I hope...

Reviewer: storylovinggamer Signed Report
Date: 11/21/17 03:35 am Title: Prologue: First day is always exciting and tiresome

I'll make sure to come back and review next chapter

Author's Response: I'll take your word for that then XD

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