Date: 11/18/17 12:57 pm Title: Chapter 1
It looks as if, before I pursue reading this one, I may have to go visit some of your prior uploads. I too, like you, am not one to do that on a regular basis. I appreciate your intention to read Your Inner You (hopefully before the holiday season ends. It's actually the best time of year to read it.) And to demonstrate how senile I must be getting, I just realized going back and fixing a grammatical error in one of the last chapters that one of the main characters in the story is named Chloe. Not kidding, and I didn't do that with you in mind at the time. I just liked that name. She's Keir/Keira's niece.
Date: 11/18/17 01:24 am Title: Chapter 1
I loved Desire Oasis , if this is half as good! I’ll live it. Good start,you do get some interesting pictures.
Author's Response: I think it's on par with Oasis. And it's similar because you'll be inside the main character's head as he's tormented. But his torment is different as is his reaction. I suppose we'll have to see how you feel about it. It's, well, it's different.