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Reviewer: Trismegistus Shandy Signed starstarstar Report
Date: 11/12/17 09:57 pm Title: Chapter 1

This is a good story and a good pastiche of "Let the Right One In". I mostly enjoyed reading it. However, there were a lot of typos and some confusingly worded sentences. If you'd like me to help copyedit your future stories, feel free to contact me through this site.

Reviewer: Erika Signed Report
Date: 11/10/17 07:43 am Title: Chapter 1

Very cute and satisfying! A compact yet still very well written narrative. Great work!

Reviewer: Pablo Signed starstarstarstarstar Report
Date: 11/10/17 12:10 am Title: Chapter 1

I really liked this. Nice story. Of course, you leave it hanging, if David survived being hit by the bus. So, I guess we'll never know.

Reviewer: Hrdknight Signed starstarstarstarstar Report
Date: 11/08/17 10:38 pm Title: Chapter 1

Great story! I remember the movie and this story is better.

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