Date: 10/30/17 07:21 pm Title: Chapter 1
That was a clever puzzle-horror story, for the most part. The beginning of the puzzle seems too random, however: mere bad luck, if one of them had to go pee urgently as soon as they woke up, would have doomed them. If one of them got locked in the bathroom before they discovered the bracelets, the other couldn't solve the remaining puzzles on their own. It also seems random whether they would switch sexes or wind up the same sex as before: whichever of them answers the quiz on the computer first will end up male, if I understand correctly.
Author's Response: I'm so glad it got you thinking! Those bracelets were quite powerful though and I wouldn't put it past the crystals to lock rooms they were in then switch off when they were beaten. Nor make someone want to pee... And as for the gender test on the computer, that was sneaky! xxx