Reviews For The Sorcerer
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Reviewer: Lailaluvs00 Signed starstarstarstarstar Report
Date: 10/29/17 01:47 am Title: Chapter 1

Ok im hooked! Cant wait to see the kid get whats coming!

Reviewer: Freya Roversdottir Signed Report
Date: 10/27/17 05:06 pm Title: Chapter 1

As a woman in physical chemistry, getting to my position through sheer effort and power of will - I do hope that it's just the character's twisted perspective and not the theme of the story :S

Reviewer: Kirri Signed Report
Date: 10/25/17 06:44 am Title: Chapter 1

Whilst I like the concept of the story ( it certainly has many possible avenues it could follow) I did feel that we needed to know more about Jimmy's background, Who is friends are and what is family are like .... Maybe even a g/f would help , The reason I mention this is so we can cotrast the difference in Sara's new life with her earlier life as Jimmy.

, It's always nice to get to the transformation scene quickly , But i do think in this case it would have added to the story if we had witnessed Jimmy getting pointed comments for Ms Kimball

Reviewer: BlindingFire Signed Report
Date: 10/24/17 08:35 pm Title: Chapter 1

It reads a bit like an r/iamverysmart post in extended prose. The concept of the story is decent, but I'm worried it's going to be too cringy to actually read.

Reviewer: storylovinggamer Signed Report
Date: 10/24/17 03:13 pm Title: Chapter 1

Intelligence is not dependent upon gender or race. There are women far more intelligent than me and any other guy i know.

Reviewer: Lilchelly Signed Report
Date: 10/24/17 10:57 am Title: Chapter 1

This has a lot of potential, but I really hope that "made dumber" tag was just a mistake and not intentional. Being a woman does not make you lose intelligence, nor being hispanic/Latinx.

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