Date: 07/27/19 03:41 pm Title: Chapter 8 - Spells, Decisions, & Confrontations
Wow, this is really getting intense! Please, please, please keep this going. I'm sure there are a lot of readers checking Amazon for magic plaster, me included. There is enough stuff going on to appeal to most everyone. I think Jay needs a dose of his own medicine, though, cheating on his best friends like that. A little plaster karma would cool his jets. Thank you for writing.
Date: 05/07/18 08:00 pm Title: Chapter One: Fucking Weird
Interesting concept and I like the fact that the gypsy isn't an evil witch like it tends to be.
Sometimes the storytelling feels a bit rushed but overall pretty good.
One thing I found frustrating: you literally had your main character raped and then he/she just walks off, only 'softly crying'. From what I understand, a rape is usually very traumatic, and especially in this case, I'd expect the character to actually be shocked and traumatized.
Author's Response: You're totally right, I tend to write in spurts and fill in details later. I'm sure I'll flesh out stuff eventually. I just don't have as much time these days.
Date: 11/10/17 01:44 pm Title: Chapter 3: Going Out
This story is so intense and kinda weird but I love it! I can get onboard with your writing style and I'm super interested to see if you turn this story into something bigger. Like, investigating where they make the plaster? Discovering the source of this magic. All that Jazz... That'd be cool. Doesn't need to be long or anything, it was good as the erotic short you had it as originally so everything extra is gravy.
Date: 10/14/17 05:06 am Title: Chapter One: Fucking Weird
Well i do see the beginnings of a story taking shape. There is enough there to pique my curiosity. For me the journey and how it affects the characters involved is where the most interest is. That is the difference between a good story and a great story. Looking forward to reading the next installment(s ) .