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Reviewer: BLT Signed starstarstarstarstar Report
Date: 10/15/17 12:35 am Title: February

I wanted to write a story like this once. I didn't know where to start, so I'm excited about what you're bringing to the table. I hope to hear more.

Reviewer: 930310 Signed Report
Date: 10/12/17 04:43 am Title: February

Can just agree with the others. If this is IRL, see a psychologist and talk things out. If this is fiction, try rewriting it.

Reviewer: Brioni Signed Report
Date: 10/11/17 01:06 pm Title: February

Fully agree with Nowawoman, you transitioned without really knowing why, sound like you'd just thought it would just be 'lekka', know what I mean, and now you're upset with the rest of the world for what 'being a woman' is really about. Should've done you homework first lovey. All you're ranting about most of us just knew that's what it would be like, long before we've even considered the first steps, because 'we are woman', not 'wannabe woman' or 'transgender'.

I suggest you rewrite this from scratch and share experience, you can get the same info across without ranting and complaining.

Happy writing.

Reviewer: Nowawoman Anonymous Report
Date: 10/09/17 06:18 pm Title: February

Sounds like the ranting of someone very resentful and confused, I am sorry to have to say.

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