Date: 12/10/17 12:01 am Title: Chapter 15
You forgot to add: "And then James woke up." Because no one could or should be that compliant, no matter how real the threat of prison loomed. Unless James secretly wanted it. Upon learning what she planned next, he SHOULD tell her: "Go ahead, bitch. Try it; over my dead body." Or maybe, "Okay now, honey, you'lre taking this just a tad too far." Unless, she knows he subconsciously desires it all. At what point might she be charged with spousal abuse? I'll still give it five stars, because you tell it well. But does the punishment really fit the crime? Ignore me; I'm just rambling.
Author's Response: Ramble on, friend. I've never been too keen on forced crossdressing, but I wanted to try my hand at it. I'm well aware of the shortcomings of this story, and I'll probably not explore this particular facet again, although it was fun to try. I'm now working on what I think will be one of my best stories. Ready in a week or two.
Date: 11/05/17 02:51 pm Title: Chapter 8
However, I might have scrounged around the internet for an appropriate photo or two of the end result, just to make the narrative a little more "fun?" You know what they say about one picture ... (a thousand words?)
Author's Response: I've thought about using pics...but...too lazy I guess.
Date: 10/24/17 02:59 pm Title: Chapter 5
It's good, Case. I wish he'd have told his wife, "FU" I'm skipping the country. "F" this forced feminization, crap. But ... this is a TG site, so ... it's good.
Author's Response: LOL That would have ruined the story, wouldn't it.
Date: 10/20/17 03:50 pm Title: Chapter 4
Omg that's so foolish he ruined his life and this actually scared me a lot thinking a little greed can end someone's life in a second but lucky for him his wife maybe has other plans except prison. 😘😻 Thanks for update and hugs
Author's Response: Always glad you're along for the ride.
Date: 10/13/17 10:58 pm Title: Chapter 1
Is this going to be a very long novel or a short story? Combined, chapters 1 and 2 read like they'd make one short and efficient backstory Prelude. Interesting, however. The old man's in pharmaceuticals? And I gather a One Percenter? To be that rich. To quote the Beach Boys, "Oh, wouldn't that be nice?"
Author's Response: 15 chapters. All about the same length.
Date: 10/09/17 09:27 am Title: Chapter 1
Amazing start to awesome story and I am very excited for this one Casey superstar you are adorable thank-you and hugs 😻😘
Author's Response: You are so sweet, Sanro. I hope I don't disappoint. This one is a little different for me.