Reviews For Double Jeopardy
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Reviewer: BlindingFire Signed Report
Date: 05/25/18 05:33 pm Title: Chapter 1 The First One

If you reformatted, I didn't notice. The entire story is still a completely unreadable wall of text.

Reviewer: Lenisia Signed Report
Date: 10/05/17 04:49 pm Title: Chapter 1 The First One

Honestly, this story is very hard to read with it being a giant wall of text, you need more spacing between paragraphs so that it can flow better and not push people away.

Author's Response: I reformatted. Hope this is better.

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