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Reviewer: Marina Twelve Signed starstarstarstar Report
Date: 12/23/17 01:40 am Title: Chapter 1

Looks like a fun story so far--I want to read more. While your English is not perfect it is quite good enough and you are a good writer.

Reviewer: Brioni Signed Report
Date: 10/06/17 11:38 am Title: Chapter 1

Welcome to our group.

I quite enjoy your first chapter.

Please pay attention to your basic sentence structures, you got some repeated words and some missing wors in some sentences.

For the reset I think this may be quite and interesting story.

Keep writing, we're waiting.

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