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Reviewer: Mary Michelson Signed Report
Date: 10/03/17 08:35 pm Title: Chapter 1: how it begins

It's a tried and true TG scenario, but there's really no reason to upload a chapter that's nothing but prologue. The story hasn't even begun yet. There's no TG or story in this TG story.

Reviewer: Grabber_blue_5oh Signed starstarstarstarstar Report
Date: 09/30/17 09:37 pm Title: Chapter 1: how it begins

Interesting story

Reviewer: DeathcoreReaper Signed starstarstarstarstar Report
Date: 09/23/17 12:39 pm Title: Chapter 1: how it begins

A really great start so far. I am curious how the story will continue. Keep it up!

Reviewer: CD_boy Signed starstarstar Report
Date: 09/22/17 01:15 pm Title: Chapter 1: how it begins

You repeated the last half the the page

Author's Response: sorry about that that was a glitch on my computer

Reviewer: c_black Signed Report
Date: 09/22/17 01:43 am Title: Chapter 1: how it begins

I like where the story is heading, but there are a few problems. First off, the last few paragraphs are repeated word for word. Second you mention a few people we know nothing about. Who's Bill that Cindy leaves with?

Author's Response: thanks for the review i will try to be more carefull about t in the future

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