Reviews For Star Crossed
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Reviewer: Elron Signed starstarstarstarstar Report
Date: 09/25/19 04:08 am Title: Wisely and slow; they stumble that run fast.

I'm really liking this story, more than 'Someone Else's Shoes'. Maybe because of the Magic - I seem to love curses, especially erroneously applied.

No good deed goes unpunished. Poor Julian is really getting screwed, and I wonder how much of a bitch she will turn into. Will she grow fur, a tail, have puppies; will Sara ever be back?
What about the witch?

I hope you are able to continue this 'tail'.
Thanks for writing.

Reviewer: ZZChromosome Signed starstar Report
Date: 08/20/19 04:32 pm Title: My only love, sprung from my only hate.

I'm having trouble deciding if you really despise women, men, or transgender people in general.

Had to quit after reading the dog-sex scene. Clearly this site needs a bestiality tag.

Reviewer: ZZChromosome Signed starstarstarstarstar Report
Date: 08/20/19 04:13 pm Title: Do you bite your thumb at us, sir?

"Revealed to the wider world in the 70s, first by a government whistle-blower, and then by the temporary llama-fication of Massachusetts"

I simply MUST read the rest of this story, just in case you clarify what "the temporary llama-fication of Massachusetts" means.

Reviewer: Sanro Signed starstarstarstarstar Report
Date: 12/23/18 10:11 am Title: Wisely and slow; they stumble that run fast.

Awesome story Joe. You are lovely

Author's Response: I'm happy to hear you enjoyed it!

Reviewer: Lailaluvs00 Signed starstarstarstarstar Report
Date: 12/21/18 04:47 am Title: My only love, sprung from my only hate.

So nasty but soooo hot!

Author's Response: Thank you, I'm glad you think so!

Reviewer: storylovinggamer Signed starstarstarstarstar Report
Date: 12/21/18 12:26 am Title: Wisely and slow; they stumble that run fast.

I hope this ends with a happy note for julia(n) and sara

Author's Response: Well, I'm certain they'll be happy at the end... one way or another!

Reviewer: Lailaluvs00 Signed starstarstarstarstar Report
Date: 01/04/18 12:57 pm Title: My only love, sprung from my only hate.

Hot!

Reviewer: ThePro Signed starstarstarstarstar Report
Date: 01/03/18 12:53 pm Title: Do you bite your thumb at us, sir?

Twisted, sad, and very sexy. Great stuff.

Reviewer: David Baxter Signed Report
Date: 12/03/17 01:17 am Title: Do you bite your thumb at us, sir?

Love your work. I've read everything you have put out. I can't wait for the update!

Reviewer: KagatoAC Signed starstarstarstar Report
Date: 09/09/17 08:28 pm Title: Do you bite your thumb at us, sir?

Well this could go to some very very weird places very quickly, I'll keep my hopes up :D

Author's Response: Oh, have no fear, I have some quite weird places planned...

Reviewer: storylovinggamer Signed starstarstarstarstar Report
Date: 09/09/17 07:19 pm Title: Do you bite your thumb at us, sir?

Well... That was definitely a bit weird.

Author's Response: I do try!

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