Date: 05/26/19 10:17 pm Title: Chapter 11
I want this to fail and backfire on Rebecca, but you seem to be driving this story in a direction where Rebecca gets what she wants with little to no repercussions. She doesn't even seem to realize that she's slowly killing a person just to get the thing she wants. She is an antagonist and entirely unlikable.
Date: 04/16/19 02:10 am Title: Chapter 11
Rebecca is classified as a murderer of Daniel’s self. Apparently Rebecca does not have any moral decency and need to be brought before a court of law . Daniel is being given unlawful drugs against his knowledge and being changed by a bitch
Date: 04/15/19 07:53 pm Title: Chapter 1
Being forced against ones will to impose an someone’s belief by deceitful/selfish means is a deceitful character/person. The subject is being forced against their will . The female roommate is the villain here. The male victim has no free will to choose since his being who he is is destroyed by chemicals by the perpetrator.
Date: 01/21/18 04:45 am Title: Chapter 3
Yikes! She's doing everything to justify how evil she is. She has zero remorse, the true definition of a villain. I kinda secretely hope Daniel realizes what's she's doing but goes along with it because Daniel is a girl inside maybe. That'd put a tinker in her plans. Also being overly giddy at removing free will... what a monster..
Date: 10/08/17 07:54 am Title: Chapter 2
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Author's Response: Thanks! It took me a bit to interpret that (If I'm right - "good story. I enjoyed it. you should definitely study how hypnosis works before you go any furthr. I like where this is going tho."? I should probably do some research, yes - though you'll see just how this attempt goes in chapter 3 (already written on my patreon)