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Reviewer: PamInPink86 Signed starstarstarstarstar Report
Date: 11/22/17 01:28 pm Title: Epilogue Just becuase she's in a dress...

Ryan? You wonderful tease!

Author's Response: Stick around for more...

Reviewer: PamInPink86 Signed starstarstarstarstar Report
Date: 11/22/17 01:27 pm Title: My First, My Last

Love Love Love it!

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Date: 11/22/17 01:27 pm Title: First Date

They’re both so lucky!

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Date: 11/22/17 01:26 pm Title: Last Tip

Is this from another story?

Reviewer: PamInPink86 Signed starstarstarstarstar Report
Date: 11/22/17 01:25 pm Title: A Friend's Request

Almost made me cry the second time!

Reviewer: Sanro Signed starstarstarstarstar Report
Date: 11/21/17 08:48 am Title: Epilogue Just becuase she's in a dress...

Oh wow I enjoyed my time with Vivian so much and it's a beautiful journey thanks and hugs 😻🤗

Author's Response: So glad you liked it!

Reviewer: oneanonly_kittykat Signed starstarstarstarstar Report
Date: 11/20/17 09:12 pm Title: Epilogue Just becuase she's in a dress...

OMG ,this has to be on of the best stories I have read on here so far ..I can some what relate to Vivian since I too am a T girl that sings in a band ....

Author's Response: If I had known, I would have loved to sneak in a few tidbits about your own experiences! Thanks so much.

Reviewer: Beeboopbeep Signed starstarstarstarstar Report
Date: 11/19/17 08:27 am Title: Epilogue Just becuase she's in a dress...

Whew, that was quite a ride. Great story as usual, but I have some feedback that I hope you take into consideration in the future.

I haven't read all of your stories, but most of the ones I have read seem to follow the same story line. A girly guy is pressured into becoming more and more feminine as he reluctantly goes along, but likes it more and more and is eventually the driving force behind her transition. There's nothing wrong with this, but I personally feel that it gets kind of old after a few stories, despite the varience in characters and circumstances. In this story for example, I would've loved to see something like Seth being positive towards his transition into womanhood, but as he gets deeper he starts to have doubts, and is conflicted between his desire to be a man again and his role in the band. I'm not saying the story should've been written this way, but it would be nice to see more varience in your story arcs, especially with how talented of a writer you are. Speaking of which, you consistently hit the mark with your description and character development, and the same goes for this story too. I always love seeing you write in ways I never would've dreamed of, but seem so painfully obvious when read.

Overall a terrific story, I had no issues with it at all, just things I hope help you out with your upcoming works. Cheers!

Author's Response: Thank you for all that. Yes, the Long and reluctant transformation is a favorite but Iíve written others. Try Meddler, Window of Opportunity, and The Lock Out. Iím almost done with The Ivy League Girlfriend and thatís pretty close to what you describe. My next, Hazed, also wouldnít be described as a simple ďreluctantĒ change: itís too weird for that. Love and Money, also, is a character story where the character Ďs change is unusual. Thanks again for the nice words!

Reviewer: Lailaluvs00 Signed starstarstarstarstar Report
Date: 11/19/17 07:05 am Title: Epilogue Just becuase she's in a dress...

Crazy for you Chloe!

Author's Response: Hugs

Reviewer: Hrdknight Signed starstarstarstarstar Report
Date: 11/18/17 01:34 pm Title: Epilogue Just becuase she's in a dress...

Loved the wrap up to this story but sad to see it end. Maybe we might get treated to a story about
Ryan and the band sometime in the future?

Author's Response: Not just Ryan but Danica and Addison also! Theyíre all drafted.

Reviewer: Lunatastic Signed starstarstarstarstar Report
Date: 11/18/17 01:21 pm Title: Epilogue Just becuase she's in a dress...

Another homerun for you, Chloe. I love love loved this journey you took us on. I look forward to your next story =)

Author's Response: Hope you donít thinks itís too weird. Canít wait to share. Thanks so much!

Reviewer: Casey Thompson Signed starstarstarstarstar Report
Date: 11/18/17 07:34 am Title: Epilogue Just becuase she's in a dress...

strong, sustained applause.

Author's Response: Very kind of you! Glad you like it!

Reviewer: Taarpa Signed Report
Date: 11/18/17 06:21 am Title: Epilogue Just becuase she's in a dress...

ChloŽ dear, nice wrap up to this one Hon! Loving Hugs Talia

Author's Response: Putting the finishing touches on Hazed now and I hope youíll like it. Thanks so much for sharing your time with vivian!

Reviewer: Grabber_blue_5oh Signed starstarstarstarstar Report
Date: 11/18/17 02:02 am Title: Epilogue Just becuase she's in a dress...

Hmmmmm

Author's Response: Sigh...

Reviewer: Roadbandit Signed starstarstarstarstar Report
Date: 11/18/17 01:10 am Title: Epilogue Just becuase she's in a dress...

Excellent ending! I love that last picture! It’s awesome.

Author's Response: Seth who? :)

Reviewer: Pablo Signed Report
Date: 11/18/17 12:47 am Title: Epilogue Just becuase she's in a dress...

I'm repeating myself from earlier, but again, Chloe, thanks for the tale. It was fun.

Author's Response: Soooooo glad to hear you liked it. I'm taking a week off but I'll be back. And I really need to find time to read yours - I will!

Reviewer: Roadbandit Signed starstarstarstarstar Report
Date: 11/17/17 09:40 pm Title: My First, My Last

Ok if that’s it I’m ok with this end! But ur story still says incomplete

Author's Response: Right! One last chapter, the epilogue. Coming soon!

Reviewer: Hrdknight Signed starstarstarstarstar Report
Date: 11/17/17 05:25 pm Title: My First, My Last

Don't think this could have gone any more perfectly than it was written! Hope there's more to wrap up this great story?

Author's Response: That's so nice! Just one epilogue chapter (coming today, I hope). Then I'll work on Hazed (can't wait to see what you think of that one).

Reviewer: Taarpa Signed Report
Date: 11/17/17 03:47 pm Title: My First, My Last

Hmmm, I recall saying something about Dean being a good "fit", I didn't actually mean it literally! (lol!). Oh My Goodness, what a lovely picture! ChloŽ dear, I'm so jealous of Vivian! Loving Hugs Talia

Author's Response: Ha! Hope you've had fun getting to know Vivian. Ready to meet Kiki?

Reviewer: Roadbandit Signed starstarstarstarstar Report
Date: 11/17/17 03:18 pm Title: My First, My Last

Well done,looking forward to the meeting of he parents! Lol

Author's Response: Oh, that would be boring. Hope you've enjoyed it! Hazed is coming next!

Reviewer: Grabber_blue_5oh Signed starstarstarstarstar Report
Date: 11/17/17 03:06 pm Title: My First, My Last

Great chapter c:

Author's Response: Hope you've enjoyed the ride!

Reviewer: Sanro Signed starstarstarstarstar Report
Date: 11/17/17 12:00 am Title: Seth? Seth Who?

If he is not happy then I am going to personally make a stew out of him and if he hurt her then he is going to get grilled 😢🤣😻😌😘

Author's Response: :)

Reviewer: Sanro Signed starstarstarstarstar Report
Date: 11/16/17 11:58 pm Title: Seth? Seth Who?

I am so excited to meet kiki now. Lots of hugs and thanks for sharing 🤣😻

Author's Response: Let's do that right after you have your turkey!

Reviewer: Grabber_blue_5oh Signed starstarstarstarstar Report
Date: 11/16/17 02:29 pm Title: First Date

Oh ho. C:
Can't wait. Can't wait to meet the FAM either! :o

Author's Response: happily ever after

Reviewer: Roadbandit Signed starstarstarstarstar Report
Date: 11/16/17 01:48 pm Title: First Date

Oh my someone is getting a BIG SURPRISE! Well done 👍

Author's Response: I liked the idea of that so much that you'll see it again in another story. So much fun for those two!

Reviewer: Sanro Signed starstarstarstarstar Report
Date: 11/16/17 01:36 pm Title: First Date

Well now he is going to find the surprise wrapped under a cute thong🤣😻 hugs

Author's Response: I think he'll be happy!

Reviewer: Sanro Signed starstarstarstarstar Report
Date: 11/16/17 01:27 pm Title: Seth? Seth Who?

Yes I am going to miss Vivian 😊

Author's Response: You'll meet Kiki soon. She's a little different. I can't wait to share her with you.

Reviewer: Sanro Signed starstarstarstarstar Report
Date: 11/16/17 11:14 am Title: Last Tip

Wowey that's awesome chapter hugs and thanks😻

Author's Response: Are you going to miss Vivian?

Reviewer: Grabber_blue_5oh Signed starstarstarstarstar Report
Date: 11/16/17 01:32 am Title: Last Tip

Great chapter

Author's Response: I'm sort of sad that it's nearly over (but excited because I'm almost ready with the next one!).

Reviewer: PamInPink86 Signed starstarstarstarstar Report
Date: 11/15/17 07:38 pm Title: Last Tip

It's all so perfect. So jealous!

Author's Response: She's one in a million!

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Date: 11/15/17 07:38 pm Title: A Friend's Request

OMG! Of course! OMG! Love it! I think I'm going to cry!

Reviewer: PamInPink86 Signed starstarstarstarstar Report
Date: 11/15/17 07:37 pm Title: Holiday Gift

Striking picture! That's not you, is it?

Reviewer: PamInPink86 Signed starstarstarstarstar Report
Date: 11/15/17 07:36 pm Title: Friend Benefit

Hot!

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Date: 11/15/17 07:36 pm Title: A Different Kind of Date

oh no! Too kinky!

Reviewer: PamInPink86 Signed starstarstarstarstar Report
Date: 11/15/17 07:36 pm Title: Good, Clean Fun

OMG! When doo we get Addison's story? Love it!

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Date: 11/15/17 07:35 pm Title: Adventure

OMG! Who is the blond girl?

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Date: 11/15/17 07:34 pm Title: Third Date

He's too good to be true.

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Date: 11/15/17 07:33 pm Title: Missing

Love it! The future husband?

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Date: 11/15/17 07:33 pm Title: Friends Again

Will she ever find a guy like Brian?

Reviewer: PamInPink86 Signed starstarstarstarstar Report
Date: 11/15/17 07:31 pm Title: Jealous Wife?

I hope Evelyn isn't too jealous!

Reviewer: Roadbandit Signed starstarstarstarstar Report
Date: 11/15/17 04:20 pm Title: Last Tip

Awesome picture, love the direction u are going in

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Date: 11/15/17 04:20 pm Title: Last Tip

Awesome picture, love the direction u are going in

Reviewer: Grabber_blue_5oh Signed starstarstarstarstar Report
Date: 11/14/17 12:42 pm Title: A Friend's Request

:o
Bum dum tissss
Def can't see how this goes. C:

Reviewer: Sanro Signed starstarstarstarstar Report
Date: 11/14/17 02:30 am Title: A Friend's Request

Oh wow this is a big twist in Vivian life If she agrees then she can have a marriage but I think it's overwhelming still. Thanks for update and hugs😍😘🤣

Author's Response: So glad you like where she's going to end up.

Reviewer: Taarpa Signed Report
Date: 11/13/17 05:59 pm Title: A Friend's Request

OMG! How did she not see that coming? (lol). This, this could be a good "fit" though....
Nice one ChloŽ dear. Loving Hugs Talia

Author's Response: I know, right? So obvious! :)

Reviewer: Pablo Signed starstarstarstarstar Report
Date: 11/13/17 02:38 pm Title: A Friend's Request

Is that the finish line I see up ahead? It's been a cute story, Chloe, thanks in advance. If you get a chance before Christmas, read mine. It was nowhere near Christmas when I thought it up, months ago, but now is the perfect time to read it. I even at one point tell Alvin the Chipmunk to go "f" himself. Again, this story has been fun. Thanks.

Author's Response: Yep, just the epilogue now. I'll make a point of reading yours!

Reviewer: Roadbandit Signed starstarstarstarstar Report
Date: 11/13/17 01:25 pm Title: A Friend's Request

I love the new twist

Author's Response: Predictable, maybe, but I love the "he was always right there in front of you" realization.

Reviewer: Grabber_blue_5oh Signed starstarstarstarstar Report
Date: 11/13/17 04:09 am Title: Holiday Gift

Awww lonely viv

Author's Response: sob... sob... Not for long!

Reviewer: Roadbandit Signed starstarstarstarstar Report
Date: 11/12/17 05:23 pm Title: Holiday Gift

Very nice! A lovely picture too

Author's Response: I know! I love that one.

Reviewer: Taarpa Signed Report
Date: 11/12/17 01:30 pm Title: Friend Benefit

OMG! Seems Vivian has a serious problem! She can't seem to keep her pants/panties on around anyone these days! (Giggles).
ChloŽ dear, nice chapter. Loving Hugs Talia

Author's Response: I think it's time for her to settle down though. It's been fun but she needs to find her husband!

Reviewer: Sanro Signed starstarstarstarstar Report
Date: 11/12/17 08:40 am Title: Friend Benefit

Cool secret and Curiosity killed the cat 🤣😍😘 lovely chapter thanks so much and hugs

Author's Response: I like those two. Hope it played out well for you.

Reviewer: Pablo Signed starstarstarstarstar Report
Date: 11/12/17 12:21 am Title: Friend Benefit

I often wonder what the models you and I use in these photos would think if they knew how we were adapting their GF (genetic female) realities for the sake of our TF weird shit. If you were ever compelled to upload it to Kindle, every one of them would have to go, sad to say. Also sadly, it’s a Saturday night ”And I ain’t got nobody. I got some money cause I just got paid…” (Sam Cooke/Cat Stevens) Well, the first part was right about it being a Saturday night. It is, and I was actually all alone listening to classical Christmas music over Pandora as I read your last two salacious chapters. Somehow, given their content, meshing the two activities like that didn’t seem right...

Author's Response: Two incongruities - GF models "posing" as TG and family-friendly music while reading p***. Glad you have someone to talk to about it. :) For what it's worth, I do use TG models when I can (it's hard - good luck finding one dressed!) and have a few selfies (from the back) in most stories.

Reviewer: Nowawoman Anonymous starstarstarstarstar Report
Date: 11/11/17 06:20 pm Title: Friend Benefit

HOT!
Just one little complaint, how did Evelyn get so beautifully slim so short after giving birth?
other than that, yeah, hot.

Author's Response: You know, I actually never thought about that. Um... um... a lot of dieting and exercise? :) I guess if I had thought about it, well, good luck finding an image that would fit!

Reviewer: Grabber_blue_5oh Signed starstarstarstarstar Report
Date: 11/11/17 04:25 pm Title: Friend Benefit

Hot :p
Ev is funny lol. Cant wait for more

Author's Response: I'm glad you think so. Writing in some humor takes extra effort. I can't wait for you to read Hazed and see if you like James's sarcasm.

Reviewer: Roadbandit Signed starstarstarstarstar Report
Date: 11/11/17 03:09 pm Title: Friend Benefit

We need longer chapters! Awesome work

Author's Response: I hear you but I feel they need to break when the scene ends. And, let me tell you, it's a bummer when a chapter runs longer than allowed so I err on the short side. Plus, at this size, I can edit one most mornings. I hope you can hang in there with me!

Reviewer: Taarpa Signed Report
Date: 11/11/17 07:09 am Title: A Different Kind of Date

Thank Godess Vivian is finally coming to her senses! This guy is just to "Shades of Gray"!
Hopefully Addison will find away to get a hold of Vivian. ChloŽ dear, nice pic's! Loving Hugs Talia

Author's Response: Absolutely! She'll find the right guy, I just know it (ok, I actually do because I wrote it). :)

Reviewer: Grabber_blue_5oh Signed starstarstarstarstar Report
Date: 11/11/17 07:04 am Title: A Different Kind of Date

Awwww

Author's Response: He was just a phase after all. She deserves more, don't you think?

Reviewer: Hrdknight Signed starstarstarstarstar Report
Date: 11/10/17 04:57 pm Title: A Different Kind of Date

Glad she got her head on straight!

Author's Response: She's going to make someone a lovely bride.

Reviewer: Roadbandit Signed starstarstarstarstar Report
Date: 11/10/17 04:33 pm Title: A Different Kind of Date

It’s over? I thought Micheal would finish the transformation

Author's Response: I do love taking you down a path only to surprise you.

Reviewer: Lillove Signed starstarstarstarstar Report
Date: 11/10/17 03:59 pm Title: Seth? Seth Who?

This specifically addresses chapter 50:
Vivian and Dean! That ship sails again!

And then, just about the whole of the story. It's a little too much sex for me, but hey that's the author's style, so who am I to complain about it? Either way, lovely character development and a wonderful story that I love to see new chapters for! I'll give it the full five!

Author's Response: Yep, that's usually my style. But you can try Meddler or Crush for a lot less of it. Glad you like it!

Reviewer: Grabber_blue_5oh Signed starstarstarstarstar Report
Date: 11/10/17 03:26 am Title: Good, Clean Fun

Hot c:

Author's Response: Maybe a little too hot for Seth?

Reviewer: Grabber_blue_5oh Signed starstarstarstarstar Report
Date: 11/10/17 02:51 am Title: Good, Clean Fun

Hot c:

Reviewer: Pablo Signed starstarstarstarstar Report
Date: 11/09/17 02:58 pm Title: Good, Clean Fun

Still, two guys attracted to two gorgeous females who started out at birth with male appendages. (And probably are still in possession of them?). How safe for Michael and the other one do you believe it would be in the real world for either to ever admit that?

Author's Response: While the two boys dressed as girls are eager to share, you'll see the two men don't. Maybe they like the idea of parading their trophies and letting everyone just think they're with "real" girls?

Reviewer: Roadbandit Signed starstarstarstarstar Report
Date: 11/09/17 02:53 pm Title: Good, Clean Fun

A new friend awesome

Author's Response: Just a passing one but you'll get to know her later.

Reviewer: Sanro Signed starstarstarstarstar Report
Date: 11/09/17 01:09 pm Title: Good, Clean Fun

Wow really great chapter and so much fun thanks cashmere 😻

Author's Response: It was fun for me, too!

Reviewer: Hrdknight Signed starstarstarstarstar Report
Date: 11/08/17 10:17 pm Title: Adventure

Looks like Vivian is about to make her dancing debut if I don't miss my guess? Love this story!

Author's Response: It's a night Seth won't forget!

Reviewer: Grabber_blue_5oh Signed starstarstarstarstar Report
Date: 11/08/17 07:17 pm Title: Adventure

Oh ho :o
Hehe I got an idea of what's about to go down :3

Author's Response: Did you way what or who?

Reviewer: Roadbandit Signed starstarstarstarstar Report
Date: 11/07/17 08:57 pm Title: Third Date

WOW

Author's Response: And now for just a little more...

Reviewer: Sanro Signed starstarstarstarstar Report
Date: 11/07/17 02:49 pm Title: Third Date

Ooooh very nice chapter thanks cashmere this was very fun read 💐👌👍😻

Author's Response: She's finally having the adventure I promised.

Reviewer: Grabber_blue_5oh Signed starstarstarstarstar Report
Date: 11/07/17 02:17 pm Title: Third Date

Such a slut :p hehe

Author's Response: Hold that thought!

Reviewer: Sanro Signed starstarstarstarstar Report
Date: 11/07/17 11:12 am Title: Missing

Wow lovely chapter and thanks for the update you are awesome hugs 😻

Author's Response: Sorry I've been slow. Been distracted writing the next one!

Reviewer: Pablo Signed starstarstarstarstar Report
Date: 11/06/17 03:01 am Title: Missing

Imaging driving down a highway you knew was not finished, and up ahead a sign warned "Freeway ends in 500 feet." Or--
Imagine you DVR-d an episode of your favorite TV program, but because the football game broadcast earlier ran long, your DVR clipped the last fifteen minutes of your show, and just left you hanging.
What would be your response? (FUCK!!! Aw!!! Shoot! Fiddlesticks. Son of a bitch!)
Pick one.
I read it all in one day, at any rate, Chloe. And now I'm caught up. Yippie ... I guess....

Author's Response: I prefer, "oh, poo!"

Reviewer: Roadbandit Signed starstarstarstarstar Report
Date: 11/06/17 02:41 am Title: Missing

Wow!

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Date: 11/06/17 12:50 am Title: Pottymouth

Forgot to add, the Kubrick movie was his landmark 1968 "2001: A Space Odyssey." Shot in the days before CGI.

Author's Response: Wasn't that around the time he was helping NASA to fake the moon landings? ;)

Reviewer: Pablo Signed Report
Date: 11/06/17 12:36 am Title: Pottymouth

In answer to your Chap. 37 question in the Chapter End Notes. Been there, done that, Chloe. I don't have photo shop skills, or the money to purchase the programs to perform them. In my only currently full upload novel on this site (the other four appear as only five-chapter previews, the whole of them relocated to Amazon Kindle)... In my only novel in full on TG Storytime, "Your Inner You," you'll find I used a primitive cut and paste technique, akin to the way Douglas Trumball and Stanley Kubrick used image cutouts of spaceships and placed them in front of lunar landscape backgrounds to create animated images that today are so easy using CGI. My cut and paste technique worked pretty good. Found the models I wished to use, hand cut them out of hard copy printouts and photographed the cutouts overtop new backgrounds. It worked pretty good. I even went so far as to remove heads from some cutouts and replace them with the heads of models whose images I'd previously used to keep things consistent.

Author's Response: Old School - I love it! I'm no expert but I've learned a few tricks in photoshop that help. That image you asked about (the one with the character who had apparently just finished a very messy sandwich), used to have a p**** in it that had to go. And I've had to conceal nipples and make hair shorter or longer to fit the story as well. I wish I was better at it but it's been fun to work with.

Reviewer: Pablo Signed starstarstarstarstar Report
Date: 11/05/17 06:53 pm Title: Freeloader

Okay, here's a dumb question: what if Viv had just told Ed who he/she really was, and to just fuck off? So, he kicks him out; when Ed learns he'd just be blown by another guy, how is going to react to that realization?

Author's Response: Keep reading!

Reviewer: Pablo Signed starstarstarstarstar Report
Date: 11/05/17 06:07 pm Title: Handjob = Dinner

Joe allowed that pic? Amazing. Sorry, I'm so far behind everyone else. Just as well. I'm an advocate for reading a story straight through, no interruptions.

Author's Response: I learned there's no nudity (nipples or full frontal) but suggestive pics seem ok. I do a lot of editing to keep the images clean(ish).

Reviewer: Pablo Signed starstarstarstarstar Report
Date: 11/05/17 04:57 pm Title: Coming Out With the Boss

You do the same thing I do when I write a story, contour the narrative to fit the photo/image I've selected to include at that point in the story.
Chap. 16. Still a long way to go.

Author's Response: Yep, that's it. I'll spend hours looking for an image that fits the overall story, then re-write to incorporate the details of the image. It's a challenge but a fun one.

Reviewer: Pablo Signed starstarstarstarstar Report
Date: 11/05/17 03:29 pm Title: Still (barely) Ahead

What can I say, Chloe? I'm enjoying the story, and look forward with each chapter to what new image you include. I wish more of these stories on this site here included relevant accompanying images. (I can think of one author I know very well, but that would not be very modest of me). Let's just say ... I try.
Only chapter 14 I'm at. Long way to go, and you're apparently still not done adding.

Author's Response: I should take a look at yours. It seems I'm always too busy writing. I write one story while doing the final editing and publishing of the one before it. Still, I'll find time - you have me curious.

Reviewer: Roadbandit Signed starstarstarstarstar Report
Date: 11/04/17 04:04 pm Title: Friends Again

Well done!

Author's Response: It's a fun change from my stories with conflict and antagonists (like the one I'm writing now - Hazed).

Reviewer: Grabber_blue_5oh Signed starstarstarstarstar Report
Date: 11/04/17 04:04 pm Title: Friends Again

:)

Author's Response: ;)

Reviewer: Sanro Signed starstarstarstarstar Report
Date: 11/04/17 02:45 am Title: Jealous Wife?

Wow Brian is a horn dog hehe very enjoyable read and Evelyn is going to be so jealous but maybe not thanks for awesome updates love them they help me a lot and very enjoyable to read. 👌😻

Author's Response: He certainly is but can you blame him?

Reviewer: Grabber_blue_5oh Signed starstarstarstarstar Report
Date: 11/03/17 09:13 am Title: Jealous Wife?

Very hot c:

Author's Response: Seems Seth made the right choice.

Reviewer: Roadbandit Signed starstarstarstarstar Report
Date: 11/02/17 02:48 pm Title: Jealous Wife?

Ur streamest chapter yet! Well done!

Author's Response: Still more to come (said with dual meaning)!

Reviewer: PamInPink86 Signed starstarstarstarstar Report
Date: 11/01/17 02:32 pm Title: Ok, Now it's an Affair

Oh my! I hope this isn't going to be a problem!

Author's Response: Brian and Evelyn seem like a great couple - have faith it'll be ok.

Reviewer: PamInPink86 Signed starstarstarstarstar Report
Date: 11/01/17 02:31 pm Title: What Affair?

Brian and Evelyn make me laugh.

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Date: 11/01/17 02:31 pm Title: Mine. His.

She's sooooooo beautiful. I want to be her.

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Date: 11/01/17 02:30 pm Title: Boyfriend

He's the one, isn't he?

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Date: 11/01/17 02:30 pm Title: New Place, New Me

that made me laugh. it's not a large band! Ha!

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Date: 11/01/17 02:29 pm Title: The End of "Free" Rent

Don't forget the bear - nice touch!

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Date: 11/01/17 02:29 pm Title: Pottymouth

Ed! Hate the man.
I love the images, Chloe. They seem close enough. Which one is you?

Reviewer: PamInPink86 Signed starstarstarstarstar Report
Date: 11/01/17 02:19 pm Title: Freeloader

Where do you find these pictures? I keep coming back for this one! Love it!

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Date: 11/01/17 02:19 pm Title: The Platinum Solution

When will we get Danica's story?

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Date: 11/01/17 02:18 pm Title: Seth? Seth Who?

I love going back to the beginning to read about the ending

Reviewer: Roadbandit Signed starstarstarstarstar Report
Date: 11/01/17 08:21 am Title: Ok, Now it's an Affair

Well done, but is it over?

Author's Response: Hmmmm... seems like it is (she said with a tease).

Reviewer: Grabber_blue_5oh Signed starstarstarstarstar Report
Date: 11/01/17 02:25 am Title: Ok, Now it's an Affair

Extremely hot c:

Author's Response: Oh, how far our girl has gone!

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Date: 10/31/17 05:59 pm Title: Seth? Seth Who?

I read the 1st chapter but that was a long time ago. And hell no I'm not in a rush haha. I love long stories. I love detail. I love stories that don't feel rushed when reading it

Author's Response: Good! Because Vivian has a bit more to experience!

Reviewer: Grabber_blue_5oh Signed starstarstarstarstar Report
Date: 10/30/17 05:47 pm Title: What Affair?

Yummy and the pic to ;)
Will she physically ever go the full 100%????

Author's Response: Well, you read the first chapter, right? Not in a rush, are we?

Reviewer: Nowawoman Anonymous starstarstarstarstar Report
Date: 10/30/17 05:20 pm Title: What Affair?

Sh*** Chloe, do women like that really exist? I think if I ever met someone like that for real I'd go completely shy and mute. giggles . and completely wet, of course!

Author's Response: In my world, they do. Mmmmm

Reviewer: Sanro Signed starstarstarstarstar Report
Date: 10/29/17 01:32 pm Title: Seth? Seth Who?

I am recovering but sometimes pain takes over and I find refuge in reading stories thanks for the constant upgrades 😊👍💐

Author's Response: I'll keep them coming!

Reviewer: Sanro Signed starstarstarstarstar Report
Date: 10/28/17 02:20 pm Title: Mine. His.

This is awesome and cute chapter thanks loving it 😘

Author's Response: hope you're feeling better!

Reviewer: Roadbandit Signed starstarstarstarstar Report
Date: 10/27/17 09:37 pm Title: Mine. His.

Excellent work!

Author's Response: thanks again. Hope you enjoy the next few!

Reviewer: Grabber_blue_5oh Signed starstarstarstarstar Report
Date: 10/27/17 08:11 pm Title: Mine. His.

Hehe yummy yummy c:
Glad she's having so much fun c:

Author's Response: she's just getting started.

Reviewer: Grabber_blue_5oh Signed starstarstarstarstar Report
Date: 10/26/17 02:13 am Title: Boyfriend

C:

Reviewer: Hrdknight Signed starstarstarstarstar Report
Date: 10/25/17 09:54 pm Title: Boyfriend

Great story that just keeps on getting better! Can hardly wait to read more.

Author's Response: Some fun for her is right around the corner

Reviewer: Roadbandit Signed starstarstarstarstar Report
Date: 10/25/17 03:05 pm Title: Boyfriend

Oh soooo cute and nice

Author's Response: Ah.... love...

Reviewer: Roadbandit Signed starstarstarstarstar Report
Date: 10/23/17 01:30 am Title: New Place, New Me

Excellent chapter!

Author's Response: Thanks!

Reviewer: Grabber_blue_5oh Signed starstarstarstarstar Report
Date: 10/22/17 02:28 pm Title: New Place, New Me

Great chapter c:
I'm so jelly of her x.x for everything x.x

Author's Response: And now, the perfect boyfriend, right?

Reviewer: Casey Thompson Signed starstarstarstarstar Report
Date: 10/21/17 07:11 am Title: The End of "Free" Rent

Yes.

Author's Response: Now she can move on... maybe a little adventure before she settles down?

Reviewer: Sanro Signed starstarstarstarstar Report
Date: 10/21/17 05:27 am Title: The End of "Free" Rent

Wow very nice revenge scheme love it hugs tight 😘

Author's Response: He had it coming, right?

Reviewer: Hrdknight Signed starstarstarstarstar Report
Date: 10/20/17 04:57 pm Title: The End of "Free" Rent

Love It! Looks like sleazy Ed is going to get what he so richly deserves. Great chapter!

Author's Response: Glad you liked it. He was our "villain" in the story. Now she just needs to find her love.

Reviewer: Roadbandit Signed starstarstarstarstar Report
Date: 10/20/17 02:01 pm Title: The End of "Free" Rent

Lol, can’t wait to see what happens with Ed!

Author's Response: That'll teach him (we hope).

Reviewer: Grabber_blue_5oh Signed starstarstarstarstar Report
Date: 10/20/17 01:56 pm Title: The End of "Free" Rent

HHahahahaha EVIL!! Love it

Author's Response: What goes around...

Reviewer: sharmapreeti Signed starstarstarstarstar Report
Date: 10/20/17 02:14 am Title: Seth? Seth Who?

Love where this is going... And I also like the images spread across the story,ifeel like it helps reader imagine the situation more clearly

Author's Response: I'm glad you like them. It's a lot of work but it's fun to find them and write around them.

Reviewer: Lailaluvs00 Signed starstarstarstarstar Report
Date: 10/19/17 11:04 pm Title: Pottymouth

Photos are fine now go get that bastard Ed! ;-)

Author's Response: Here ya go!

Reviewer: Roadbandit Signed starstarstarstarstar Report
Date: 10/18/17 11:29 pm Title: Pottymouth

The pictures are good , I knew they were of different persons but they fit very well!

Author's Response: That's reassuring. Thanks.

Reviewer: Taarpa Signed Report
Date: 10/18/17 11:22 pm Title: Pottymouth

Grrr! That Motherfu**er! He must die now! Grrrr! ChloŽ dear, our girl deserves better. (BTW, nice pic's!) Loving Hugs Talia

Author's Response: Not going to win Landlord of the Year, that's for sure.

Reviewer: Grabber_blue_5oh Signed starstarstarstarstar Report
Date: 10/18/17 10:04 pm Title: Pottymouth

So short x.x

Author's Response: I find I need to break them where it's logical. The next words begin a whole new scene. Hope it's not too frustrating. It also helps because I don't have much time for final editing that I do before posting.

Reviewer: Charlize63 Signed Report
Date: 10/18/17 10:02 pm Title: Seth? Seth Who?

Oh Vivian can have so much fun with landlord posting videos without permission I guess we no who is going to be paying now

Reviewer: Nowawoman Anonymous starstarstarstarstar Report
Date: 10/18/17 08:14 pm Title: Pottymouth

The only one that was not quite consistent was my favourite, the one with Sheila, but that didn#t really bother me much, to be honest. I think it would have been difficult to make the girls hair black, unless you are a trained and exprienced retouche artist or have some very elaborate (and probably rather expensive) software.
I rather hope Ed gets his balls kicked into orbit at some point *giggles*.
Oh, and your last chapters actually spawned this idea in my head, that I had to just quickly put on here. Thanks for a couple of almost sleepless night, Honey. *giggles some more*

Author's Response: So glad I was able to tickle that special spot.

Reviewer: charliefornow Signed starstarstarstarstar Report
Date: 10/18/17 05:53 pm Title: Never Be With a Woman?

Cool story. I'm jealous.

Author's Response: She's having such a great time!

Reviewer: PamInPink86 Signed starstarstarstarstar Report
Date: 10/18/17 02:34 pm Title: Never Be With a Woman?

OMG! she had everyone in the band now!

Author's Response: Oh no! Is our little girl a tramp?

Reviewer: PamInPink86 Signed starstarstarstarstar Report
Date: 10/18/17 02:34 pm Title: Sold!

OMG! Is he the one?

Reviewer: PamInPink86 Signed starstarstarstarstar Report
Date: 10/18/17 02:34 pm Title: For Sale?

now she's having fun!

Reviewer: PamInPink86 Signed starstarstarstarstar Report
Date: 10/18/17 02:33 pm Title: Casual

what a trip she's having!

Reviewer: PamInPink86 Signed starstarstarstarstar Report
Date: 10/18/17 02:33 pm Title: The Night that Made Me Vivian

I hope Sheila isn't mad!

Reviewer: PamInPink86 Signed starstarstarstarstar Report
Date: 10/18/17 02:32 pm Title: Fantasy Threesome

too hot!

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