Date: 11/20/17 09:12 pm Title: Epilogue Just becuase she's in a dress...
OMG ,this has to be on of the best stories I have read on here so far ..I can some what relate to Vivian since I too am a T girl that sings in a band ....
Author's Response: If I had known, I would have loved to sneak in a few tidbits about your own experiences! Thanks so much.
Date: 11/19/17 08:27 am Title: Epilogue Just becuase she's in a dress...
Whew, that was quite a ride. Great story as usual, but I have some feedback that I hope you take into consideration in the future.
I haven't read all of your stories, but most of the ones I have read seem to follow the same story line. A girly guy is pressured into becoming more and more feminine as he reluctantly goes along, but likes it more and more and is eventually the driving force behind her transition. There's nothing wrong with this, but I personally feel that it gets kind of old after a few stories, despite the varience in characters and circumstances. In this story for example, I would've loved to see something like Seth being positive towards his transition into womanhood, but as he gets deeper he starts to have doubts, and is conflicted between his desire to be a man again and his role in the band. I'm not saying the story should've been written this way, but it would be nice to see more varience in your story arcs, especially with how talented of a writer you are. Speaking of which, you consistently hit the mark with your description and character development, and the same goes for this story too. I always love seeing you write in ways I never would've dreamed of, but seem so painfully obvious when read.
Overall a terrific story, I had no issues with it at all, just things I hope help you out with your upcoming works. Cheers!
Author's Response: Thank you for all that. Yes, the Long and reluctant transformation is a favorite but Iíve written others. Try Meddler, Window of Opportunity, and The Lock Out. Iím almost done with The Ivy League Girlfriend and thatís pretty close to what you describe. My next, Hazed, also wouldnít be described as a simple ďreluctantĒ change: itís too weird for that. Love and Money, also, is a character story where the character Ďs change is unusual. Thanks again for the nice words!
Date: 11/18/17 01:34 pm Title: Epilogue Just becuase she's in a dress...
Loved the wrap up to this story but sad to see it end. Maybe we might get treated to a story about
Ryan and the band sometime in the future?
Author's Response: Not just Ryan but Danica and Addison also! Theyíre all drafted.
Date: 11/18/17 01:21 pm Title: Epilogue Just becuase she's in a dress...
Another homerun for you, Chloe. I love love loved this journey you took us on. I look forward to your next story =)
Author's Response: Hope you donít thinks itís too weird. Canít wait to share. Thanks so much!
Date: 11/18/17 06:21 am Title: Epilogue Just becuase she's in a dress...
ChloŽ dear, nice wrap up to this one Hon! Loving Hugs Talia
Author's Response: Putting the finishing touches on Hazed now and I hope youíll like it. Thanks so much for sharing your time with vivian!
Date: 11/18/17 12:47 am Title: Epilogue Just becuase she's in a dress...
I'm repeating myself from earlier, but again, Chloe, thanks for the tale. It was fun.
Author's Response: Soooooo glad to hear you liked it. I'm taking a week off but I'll be back. And I really need to find time to read yours - I will!
Date: 11/17/17 05:25 pm Title: My First, My Last
Don't think this could have gone any more perfectly than it was written! Hope there's more to wrap up this great story?
Author's Response: That's so nice! Just one epilogue chapter (coming today, I hope). Then I'll work on Hazed (can't wait to see what you think of that one).
Date: 11/17/17 03:47 pm Title: My First, My Last
Hmmm, I recall saying something about Dean being a good "fit", I didn't actually mean it literally! (lol!). Oh My Goodness, what a lovely picture! ChloŽ dear, I'm so jealous of Vivian! Loving Hugs Talia
Author's Response: Ha! Hope you've had fun getting to know Vivian. Ready to meet Kiki?
Date: 11/13/17 02:38 pm Title: A Friend's Request
Is that the finish line I see up ahead? It's been a cute story, Chloe, thanks in advance. If you get a chance before Christmas, read mine. It was nowhere near Christmas when I thought it up, months ago, but now is the perfect time to read it. I even at one point tell Alvin the Chipmunk to go "f" himself. Again, this story has been fun. Thanks.
Author's Response: Yep, just the epilogue now. I'll make a point of reading yours!
Date: 11/12/17 01:30 pm Title: Friend Benefit
OMG! Seems Vivian has a serious problem! She can't seem to keep her pants/panties on around anyone these days! (Giggles).
ChloŽ dear, nice chapter. Loving Hugs Talia
Author's Response: I think it's time for her to settle down though. It's been fun but she needs to find her husband!
Date: 11/12/17 12:21 am Title: Friend Benefit
I often wonder what the models you and I use in these photos would think if they knew how we were adapting their GF (genetic female) realities for the sake of our TF weird shit. If you were ever compelled to upload it to Kindle, every one of them would have to go, sad to say. Also sadly, it’s a Saturday night ”And I ain’t got nobody. I got some money cause I just got paid…” (Sam Cooke/Cat Stevens) Well, the first part was right about it being a Saturday night. It is, and I was actually all alone listening to classical Christmas music over Pandora as I read your last two salacious chapters. Somehow, given their content, meshing the two activities like that didn’t seem right...
Author's Response: Two incongruities - GF models "posing" as TG and family-friendly music while reading p***. Glad you have someone to talk to about it. :) For what it's worth, I do use TG models when I can (it's hard - good luck finding one dressed!) and have a few selfies (from the back) in most stories.
Date: 11/11/17 06:20 pm Title: Friend Benefit
Just one little complaint, how did Evelyn get so beautifully slim so short after giving birth?
other than that, yeah, hot.
Author's Response: You know, I actually never thought about that. Um... um... a lot of dieting and exercise? :) I guess if I had thought about it, well, good luck finding an image that would fit!
Date: 11/11/17 03:09 pm Title: Friend Benefit
We need longer chapters! Awesome work
Author's Response: I hear you but I feel they need to break when the scene ends. And, let me tell you, it's a bummer when a chapter runs longer than allowed so I err on the short side. Plus, at this size, I can edit one most mornings. I hope you can hang in there with me!
Date: 11/11/17 07:09 am Title: A Different Kind of Date
Thank Godess Vivian is finally coming to her senses! This guy is just to "Shades of Gray"!
Hopefully Addison will find away to get a hold of Vivian. ChloŽ dear, nice pic's! Loving Hugs Talia
Author's Response: Absolutely! She'll find the right guy, I just know it (ok, I actually do because I wrote it). :)
Date: 11/10/17 03:59 pm Title: Seth? Seth Who?
This specifically addresses chapter 50:
Vivian and Dean! That ship sails again!
And then, just about the whole of the story. It's a little too much sex for me, but hey that's the author's style, so who am I to complain about it? Either way, lovely character development and a wonderful story that I love to see new chapters for! I'll give it the full five!
Author's Response: Yep, that's usually my style. But you can try Meddler or Crush for a lot less of it. Glad you like it!
Date: 11/09/17 02:58 pm Title: Good, Clean Fun
Still, two guys attracted to two gorgeous females who started out at birth with male appendages. (And probably are still in possession of them?). How safe for Michael and the other one do you believe it would be in the real world for either to ever admit that?
Author's Response: While the two boys dressed as girls are eager to share, you'll see the two men don't. Maybe they like the idea of parading their trophies and letting everyone just think they're with "real" girls?
Date: 11/06/17 03:01 am Title: Missing
Imaging driving down a highway you knew was not finished, and up ahead a sign warned "Freeway ends in 500 feet." Or--
Imagine you DVR-d an episode of your favorite TV program, but because the football game broadcast earlier ran long, your DVR clipped the last fifteen minutes of your show, and just left you hanging.
What would be your response? (FUCK!!! Aw!!! Shoot! Fiddlesticks. Son of a bitch!)
I read it all in one day, at any rate, Chloe. And now I'm caught up. Yippie ... I guess....
Author's Response: I prefer, "oh, poo!"
Date: 11/06/17 12:36 am Title: Pottymouth
In answer to your Chap. 37 question in the Chapter End Notes. Been there, done that, Chloe. I don't have photo shop skills, or the money to purchase the programs to perform them. In my only currently full upload novel on this site (the other four appear as only five-chapter previews, the whole of them relocated to Amazon Kindle)... In my only novel in full on TG Storytime, "Your Inner You," you'll find I used a primitive cut and paste technique, akin to the way Douglas Trumball and Stanley Kubrick used image cutouts of spaceships and placed them in front of lunar landscape backgrounds to create animated images that today are so easy using CGI. My cut and paste technique worked pretty good. Found the models I wished to use, hand cut them out of hard copy printouts and photographed the cutouts overtop new backgrounds. It worked pretty good. I even went so far as to remove heads from some cutouts and replace them with the heads of models whose images I'd previously used to keep things consistent.
Author's Response: Old School - I love it! I'm no expert but I've learned a few tricks in photoshop that help. That image you asked about (the one with the character who had apparently just finished a very messy sandwich), used to have a p**** in it that had to go. And I've had to conceal nipples and make hair shorter or longer to fit the story as well. I wish I was better at it but it's been fun to work with.
Date: 11/05/17 06:53 pm Title: Freeloader
Okay, here's a dumb question: what if Viv had just told Ed who he/she really was, and to just fuck off? So, he kicks him out; when Ed learns he'd just be blown by another guy, how is going to react to that realization?
Author's Response: Keep reading!
Date: 11/05/17 06:07 pm Title: Handjob = Dinner
Joe allowed that pic? Amazing. Sorry, I'm so far behind everyone else. Just as well. I'm an advocate for reading a story straight through, no interruptions.
Author's Response: I learned there's no nudity (nipples or full frontal) but suggestive pics seem ok. I do a lot of editing to keep the images clean(ish).
Date: 11/05/17 04:57 pm Title: Coming Out With the Boss
You do the same thing I do when I write a story, contour the narrative to fit the photo/image I've selected to include at that point in the story.
Chap. 16. Still a long way to go.
Author's Response: Yep, that's it. I'll spend hours looking for an image that fits the overall story, then re-write to incorporate the details of the image. It's a challenge but a fun one.
Date: 11/05/17 03:29 pm Title: Still (barely) Ahead
What can I say, Chloe? I'm enjoying the story, and look forward with each chapter to what new image you include. I wish more of these stories on this site here included relevant accompanying images. (I can think of one author I know very well, but that would not be very modest of me). Let's just say ... I try.
Only chapter 14 I'm at. Long way to go, and you're apparently still not done adding.
Author's Response: I should take a look at yours. It seems I'm always too busy writing. I write one story while doing the final editing and publishing of the one before it. Still, I'll find time - you have me curious.
Date: 11/04/17 02:45 am Title: Jealous Wife?
Wow Brian is a horn dog hehe very enjoyable read and Evelyn is going to be so jealous but maybe not thanks for awesome updates love them they help me a lot and very enjoyable to read. 👌😻
Author's Response: He certainly is but can you blame him?
Date: 10/31/17 05:59 pm Title: Seth? Seth Who?
I read the 1st chapter but that was a long time ago. And hell no I'm not in a rush haha. I love long stories. I love detail. I love stories that don't feel rushed when reading it
Author's Response: Good! Because Vivian has a bit more to experience!
Date: 10/30/17 05:20 pm Title: What Affair?
Sh*** Chloe, do women like that really exist? I think if I ever met someone like that for real I'd go completely shy and mute. giggles . and completely wet, of course!
Author's Response: In my world, they do. Mmmmm
Date: 10/20/17 02:14 am Title: Seth? Seth Who?
Love where this is going... And I also like the images spread across the story,ifeel like it helps reader imagine the situation more clearly
Author's Response: I'm glad you like them. It's a lot of work but it's fun to find them and write around them.
Date: 10/18/17 10:04 pm Title: Pottymouth
So short x.x
Author's Response: I find I need to break them where it's logical. The next words begin a whole new scene. Hope it's not too frustrating. It also helps because I don't have much time for final editing that I do before posting.
Date: 10/18/17 08:14 pm Title: Pottymouth
The only one that was not quite consistent was my favourite, the one with Sheila, but that didn#t really bother me much, to be honest. I think it would have been difficult to make the girls hair black, unless you are a trained and exprienced retouche artist or have some very elaborate (and probably rather expensive) software.
I rather hope Ed gets his balls kicked into orbit at some point *giggles*.
Oh, and your last chapters actually spawned this idea in my head, that I had to just quickly put on here. Thanks for a couple of almost sleepless night, Honey. *giggles some more*
Author's Response: So glad I was able to tickle that special spot.