Date: 08/19/20 09:46 pm Title: Chapter 1
So I'll say I wasn't a big fan of the whole "it was all a dream" undoing three chapters, but I also am enjoying the story much more after it, so I'll get over it, haha. I notice an obvious improvement in the writing after your 3 year break, and am really digging the "mysterious flower" making Ben (and maybe others?) go insane. Overall, I really like the story and the romance, and can't wait to keep reading!
Author's Response: I'm so glad you're enjoying it. I can't wait for you to read more and I hope you'll also enjoy what's coming.
Date: 08/17/20 12:40 am Title: Chapter 14
This is brilliant. Just read it from the beginning. More please, I'd love to read it to its conclusion. Please do consider continuing the story.
Author's Response: Oh I'm definitely finishing this story. Thank you so much for the kind words. I'm glad you're enjoying it
Date: 08/15/20 04:18 pm Title: Chapter 1
Thank you thank you thank you for continuing this story! I love this one and was sad when you stopped writing it.
Author's Response: Thank you for the kind words. I really do appreciate it. It was a hard pill to swallow for me when I had to stop writing but now, I'm determined to finish it. I hope you enjoy it
Date: 11/21/18 06:20 pm Title: Chapter 11
Read through this story again for the second time, I guess it will probably never continue beyond this point but it is definitely one of my favorites.
And all in all i think it was a pretty good spot to end it, even if there is lots of potential for more that would be similar to a lot of other stories and could go on forever.
Author's Response: Hey Elly! For a while there, I thought this story would never be completed either but all the dice have rolled the right way and here I am writing again. I don't know if it's something you'd want to read but chapter 12 has been added. Thank you for reading my story. I really do appreciate it.
Date: 12/15/17 01:48 am Title: Chapter 1
Looks pretty good so far. The writing, while not great, is good. Work on your vocabulary some more. My only real criticism is that it is too short of an entry. It should be about THREE times as long---enough to get a feel of what kid of a story it is going to be---Yes, a few adventures, with wind and waves, etc., and then, perhaps waking on a strange island and seeing this strangely dressed girl, etc. Its not long enough to tell if I am going to like the story or not---you need to HOOK the reader before you break it off.
Date: 09/23/17 01:07 pm Title: Chapter 11
This is a really lovely story, with some excellent characterisation. I especially love the way that Jo can't help the feelings that his life on the Island have triggered. Many of us have crossed that particular Rubicon. Please carry on Emma!!
Date: 09/10/17 05:21 am Title: Chapter 9
I think only way to save this one is for Jo to wake up and still be on that island. It had a whole 'lost' feel to it which was amazing and you were doing really great...but then they get saved so early??
Author's Response: I'd always planned for this story to be about Jo's life after the island, not during. The island was always supposed to just be a trigger for self-reflection. Anyway, I plan for there to be a retelling and their time on the island will last a lot longer.
Date: 09/08/17 06:08 pm Title: Chapter 8
I was not si sure about. It in the beginning, but it Is a good story, even if the thing with the trunk is highly improbable to say the least. But that aside everything else is very believable and nicely written, too.
It seems obvious that Jo and Mikey are heading for a future as a couple, nothing else would really make sense.
Date: 09/07/17 05:57 am Title: Chapter 1
This is one of my recent favorite. Please update daily and do u thinking of making mikey and jo possible future couple?
Author's Response: Thanks a lot! Probably, I don't know, it's an idea I've thought about a lot but if I'm going to do it, I want to do it right. But I guess we'll have to wait and see))
Date: 09/05/17 11:59 pm Title: Chapter 2
Enjoying this story so far. Looks like it could be a really good one. I would love to see Jo become an
indispensable member of the survival group as well as what ever else you have planned for him.
Maybe figures out a way to trap animals for food or something that makes the others really appreciate him for more than looking like a girl? Just a thought.