Date: 08/29/17 10:11 pm Title: The Kinky Couple and the Boob Detachment Charm
This story is very well written and I like the premise a lot. All (three) chapters so far are really intriguing, but not to the point where you'd expect a full-fledged storyline. Nonetheless, the erotica is well embedded into a Hogwarts narration, but perhaps hinting at well-known characters or events from the Harry Potter universe (not necessarily involvement, just hinting!) would make the story even more pleasurable to read.
I especially like the detachment idea, and find the thought of being able to please your loved ones unnoticed in public hilarious. Also, I hope Kevin is kind of a boob man. Perhaps they also dabble in Illusions?
Date: 08/29/17 03:51 pm Title: The Kinky Couple and the Boob Detachment Charm
I've always wanted a polyjuice TG swap scene like this! It's an awesome story, keep it up! Ps. Do u mind writing more chapters involving the poly juice potion too? :)
Author's Response: Thanks! Any ideas for other cool stuff to do with Polyjuice Potion specifically? I doubt I'm done with potions, but once you've used Polyjuice for TG, what else do you do that's actually original?