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Reviewer: Alan Signed starstarstarstarstar Report
Date: 03/15/19 01:19 am Title: The Kinky Couple and the Boob Detachment Charm

I am recalling a brassiere advert with the phrase "lifts and separates ..." :)

Reviewer: Roadbandit Signed starstarstarstarstar Report
Date: 03/05/19 10:37 am Title: The Kinky Couple and the Potion of Genital Experience

Wow excellent chapter, worth the wait

Author's Response: Thanks!

Reviewer: ryanzombie Signed Report
Date: 01/09/18 04:55 am Title: The Kinky Couple and the Boob Detachment Charm

When will you continue?

Reviewer: Roadbandit Signed starstarstarstarstar Report
Date: 09/01/17 04:42 pm Title: The Kinky Couple and the Potion of Forceful Demasculinization

Excellent storyline,if you write more chapters I will read them happily!

Author's Response: I think I have one or two more in me.

Reviewer: Roadbandit Signed starstarstarstarstar Report
Date: 08/31/17 10:19 pm Title: The Kinky Couple and the Bungled Bodyswap

Excellent chapter!

Reviewer: CD_boy Signed starstarstarstarstar Report
Date: 08/31/17 05:20 pm Title: The Kinky Couple and the Polyjuice Potion

Can't wait for more!!!

Reviewer: Cato Signed starstarstarstarstar Report
Date: 08/29/17 10:11 pm Title: The Kinky Couple and the Boob Detachment Charm

This story is very well written and I like the premise a lot. All (three) chapters so far are really intriguing, but not to the point where you'd expect a full-fledged storyline. Nonetheless, the erotica is well embedded into a Hogwarts narration, but perhaps hinting at well-known characters or events from the Harry Potter universe (not necessarily involvement, just hinting!) would make the story even more pleasurable to read.

I especially like the detachment idea, and find the thought of being able to please your loved ones unnoticed in public hilarious. Also, I hope Kevin is kind of a boob man. Perhaps they also dabble in Illusions?

Reviewer: KristinRoa Signed starstarstarstarstar Report
Date: 08/29/17 03:51 pm Title: The Kinky Couple and the Boob Detachment Charm

I've always wanted a polyjuice TG swap scene like this! It's an awesome story, keep it up! Ps. Do u mind writing more chapters involving the poly juice potion too? :)

Author's Response: Thanks! Any ideas for other cool stuff to do with Polyjuice Potion specifically? I doubt I'm done with potions, but once you've used Polyjuice for TG, what else do you do that's actually original?

Reviewer: Roadbandit Signed starstarstarstarstar Report
Date: 08/29/17 10:15 am Title: The Kinky Couple and the Polyjuice Potion

Awesome chapters!

Reviewer: Drie17 Signed starstarstarstarstar Report
Date: 08/29/17 09:23 am Title: The Kinky Couple and the Polyjuice Potion

Very nice story! Please more!

Reviewer: Drie17 Signed starstarstarstarstar Report
Date: 08/28/17 09:01 am Title: The Kinky Couple and the Swapping Genitals

Very nice story! I hope you continue with it! 👍🏼👍🏼👍🏼

Reviewer: Stefan Signed starstarstarstarstar Report
Date: 08/26/17 12:03 am Title: The Kinky Couple and the Boob Detachment Charm

Awesome Story

Author's Response: Thanks!

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