Reviews For Saving his life
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Reviewer: PinkGiraffe007 Signed starstarstarstarstar Report
Date: 10/19/17 05:01 pm Title: Prologue

I'm loving the sorry so far. It has all my kinks wrapped up together, but I will say that you do seem to be rushing through everything. He's on a shopping trip and picking out clothes, then he's suddenly done by the end of the paragraph. Still a great job so far, but I'd prefer more description in longer chapters (to answer your reply to the other comment).

Author's Response: Thank you for replying, this will be taken on board. I write each chapter immediately before posting so will take that into consideration. Sorry if I don't post in however long it will be, life is just a little too busy but I will try! Many thanks Anna

Reviewer: Erika Signed starstarstarstarstar Report
Date: 09/20/17 09:31 pm Title: Forcing it upon him

Hey, just wanted to let you know that you've done a lovely job so far! You're doing a great job writing out a gradual change, and i'll definitely be following this story as it continues! Take your time, you're doing amazing!

Author's Response: Hi, I'm grateful for the feedback and I'm glad you're enjoying it. My only question is would you prefer to have short chapters updated every week, or a long chapter once in a while as I can't decide which is preferable. Any response and criticism will be taken on from anyone BTW.

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