Reviews For Mommys sissy boy
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Reviewer: LoveFox Signed starstarstarstarstar Report
Date: 09/26/19 12:11 pm Title: Chapter 1

Been 2 years since it updated but I enjoyed reading it and want more!

Reviewer: Fasha Signed star Report
Date: 09/02/17 11:23 pm Title: Chapter 1

Proof read your story. This story has so many errors it's bearly readable

Reviewer: 930310 Signed star Report
Date: 08/16/17 12:06 am Title: Chapter 1

Is it a thing with sissy stories that the grammar should be at the same level as the one in the average seven-year-old? This is not good writing.

Reviewer: Fasha Signed starstar Report
Date: 08/09/17 11:36 pm Title: Chapter 1

This is my review

Plot: This story has a amazing plot it keeps me wanting to come for more. I will give you a "A" for that.

Grammar: Needs Improvement. The grammar has a lot of errors making the story difficult to read. I will give you a "C" for that.

Delivery: this story has a great plot but it was poorly executed, it made me feel like if it was rushed. Try expanding on the story a bit more. You get a "F" for that

Overall: It is a good story but it needs improvement. I can't wait until I can read the next chapter. Overall I give it a D+

Reviewer: Jessica0016 Signed starstarstarstar Report
Date: 08/06/17 09:49 pm Title: Chapter 1

Love the concept sure is a bit different then other story would like to read more

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