Date: 08/09/17 11:36 pm Title: Chapter 1
This is my review
Plot: This story has a amazing plot it keeps me wanting to come for more. I will give you a "A" for that.
Grammar: Needs Improvement. The grammar has a lot of errors making the story difficult to read. I will give you a "C" for that.
Delivery: this story has a great plot but it was poorly executed, it made me feel like if it was rushed. Try expanding on the story a bit more. You get a "F" for that
Overall: It is a good story but it needs improvement. I can't wait until I can read the next chapter. Overall I give it a D+