Reviews For On the Other Side
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Reviewer: saikalyan Signed Report
Date: 08/27/19 08:49 am Title: Chapter 1

Its a nice story and a good start
Please dont stop it here.

Reviewer: storylovinggamer Signed Report
Date: 08/04/17 04:27 am Title: Chapter 1

Its a interesting story idea, but its not executed very well. The characters feel like puppets and just feel fake, they lack realism in their reactions... If you were to encounter a magic mirror that you just shoved your hand through, would you say "Hey babe, i think this is a magic mirror!" right off the bat? You'd probably say "What the hell? Is there something wrong with this? Did someone setup a prank?" ... Also, she was a bit too straightforward in the way that she told him she wanted to have sex with a woman, perhaps they could go up to bed, and then as they are preparing to sleep, she could ask him "Could i ask you something? And you'll promise not to say anything about it?"

Reviewer: Roadbandit Signed starstarstarstarstar Report
Date: 08/01/17 12:57 am Title: Chapter 1

Interesting start! Looking forward to read more.

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