Date: 07/02/18 10:09 pm Title: Free
Definitely one star for being a story.
Two star for good structure. :)
Three star because it kept my interest. :D
Since it brought out an uncomfortable emotion in me, it gets a four star.
And five star because I want to know what happened next. Did Jack get saddled with Greg, was there a chance to reverse some of the changes, had Greg managed to become self reliant, did the two of them ever give Tillman's justice? I wanna know more. XD
Author's Response: I'm working on the fourth draft of the novel version. I'll do at least one more draft before I release it.
Date: 08/15/17 06:54 am Title: Twins
It seems just a tad too coincidental that both bodies' partners would just show up asking for sex at the same time. One would also think that there'd be more than a body swap if they'd managed to pass as each other in the past, yet this is supposedly the first time this occured?