Date: 01/17/18 05:39 am Title: Chapter 3
Awesome addition! Again, well worth the wait. If my memory serves it appears the second chapter was edited some too, Dani's interactions with his roommate seem easier to follow now. I don't wanna pressure you cause writing takes time but this series is so good and I am so excited for brunch.
Date: 07/18/17 07:55 pm Title: Chapter 1
An amazing start! Excited to see where this goes. I enjoyed the way you described Danny's changes, as well as the believable scenario (drunkenness) causing him to rationalize these new feelings. Danny was intentiobally a bit of a jackass, and I am earnestly waiting to see how he deals with his new change in perspective.