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Reviewer: Musicat Signed starstarstarstar Report
Date: 07/29/17 09:49 pm Title: Chapter 4: The Role of june

If anything it was too short :P

from the Chapter 4 end notes.

Reviewer: AlexiaRose Signed starstarstarstar Report
Date: 07/18/17 01:34 pm Title: Chapter 3: housekeeping

You are getting a good balance of excitement and fear. I can imagine this for myself. It would be scary, but also arousing. I like that it is subtle in the ways it is moving as a story.

Reviewer: MLMde Signed starstarstarstar Report
Date: 07/12/17 08:13 pm Title: Chapter 2

Feels a tiny bit rushed and rough on the edges (needs more proof reading), but definitely interesting and enjoyable so far.

Reviewer: Dr Riley Reiza Signed starstarstarstar Report
Date: 07/11/17 01:59 pm Title: Chapter 1

Wow this is kind of cruel, but it'll amount to an interesting story with some effort. Keep it up.

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