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Reviewer: MrSimple Signed starstarstarstarstar Report
Date: 01/24/19 02:44 pm Title: Chapter 1

I really enjoyed this one.

The story started with an accident, but I'm glad it progressed in a positive light. The ending was a nice touch that gave me a feeling everything worked out for everyone. :)

But I kinda wonder how Ashley took her breakup from Todd. >.>

Reviewer: 930310 Signed starstarstarstar Report
Date: 06/29/17 04:30 am Title: Chapter 1

Great job as usual. The story was amusing until the very end and full of twists and turns.

Reviewer: storylovinggamer Signed starstarstarstarstar Report
Date: 06/28/17 03:31 am Title: Chapter 1

On so fourth it goes... Loved it, haha!

Reviewer: Amanda Hawkins Signed Report
Date: 06/27/17 11:43 pm Title: Chapter 1

Nice work. Very readable. Humor isn't easy to write and there's not enough of it around in TG fiction. Color me impressed!

Reviewer: Portia Bennett Signed starstarstarstarstar Report
Date: 06/27/17 03:02 am Title: Chapter 1

Oh what a tangled web we weave when we first choose to deceive.

Reviewer: Quintilianus Signed starstarstarstarstar Report
Date: 06/26/17 05:49 pm Title: Chapter 1

This was really entertaining! You did a good job with the dialogue--I never had any trouble telling who was speaking and the exposition between the characters felt pretty naturalistic.

Reviewer: Rks Signed starstarstarstarstar Report
Date: 06/26/17 01:08 pm Title: Chapter 1

This was fun, I like it!
Is there more to this story?

Author's Response: That's all. I have no plans to write more about these characters.

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