Date: 07/11/17 10:50 pm Title: Chapter 10 Alternate Ending
Nice work on this story hun! Both endings were interesting in their own way, though I think the alternate ending needed a touch more fleshing out. I kinda enjoyed the alternative one more than the 'happily ever after' one, but well I'm weird! I would be interested to know which ending you preferred though.
Looking forward to your next story!
Author's Response: I like both. The romantic ending is something that would be nice to have, a love and a life that is more happy than sad. The alternate has appeal because I would love to be the submissive Pet of a loving Mistress or Master. I guess the reason for the second being more interesting was the revenge nature. Thank you though for all your kind words and helpful comments. I love thinking up stories, but getting them to the written stage has always been my lacking point.
Date: 07/02/17 10:12 pm Title: Chapter 7 Becoming Pet
Still really enjoying this story! Looking forward to how you're going to sum up everything!
Author's Response: Thank you. It is rattling around in my head, just haven't seen the complete path yet. I can tell you that there will be two endings.
Date: 06/23/17 07:14 am Title: Chapter 1
This is a really fun story! Other than needing a quick proofread here and there, you're crafting quite the engaging story. Keep doing what you're doing- and keep doing it often. I want to see where this goes.
Author's Response: Thank you Denali. I am working on proofreading better. I saw the earlier mistakes when reading to do the next chapters. I will work on that, but I can be a bad speller so I am sure a few will get through.
Date: 06/22/17 12:06 pm Title: Chapter 1
I'm enjoying your story so far! The chapters, while a touch on the short side, have the right about of pacing and detail for the story you have so far. I did notice a couple of minor spelling mistakes but that is about all.
Keep up the good work honey and I look forward to seeing where you take this one!
Author's Response: Thank you Kara Rose. I am working on proofreading better. I saw the earlier mistakes when reading to do the next chapters. I will work on that, but I can be a bad speller so I am sure a few will get through. I am glad the pacing seems OK to you.