Date: 02/27/19 08:28 pm Title: Fourth Vial (Part 1)
Thats a red light. Biiiiiiiggggg no. Nonononono.
Hek you mistress that is The Most Evil and manipulative thing yet.
Done? DONE?! i hope they have a good discussion on how wrong it was for her to say that.
Its nice that the fog can be reasoned with, thats certainly good enough for me.
Despite (and because of) this truly delectible angst im really digging the possible character arcs.
Whooo there are a lot of feelings. Wow. I mean i know what i would do. Mostly because im a co-dependent puddle who would roll over at the first hint of abandonment but im eager to see how this goes.
Date: 02/27/19 08:16 pm Title: Third Vial (Part 2)
Oooookay. Deep breaths. Whew.
The pink fog is alarming. I dont like it. Nothing to be done about that.
The "enjoy that body while you have it" bit was DELIGHTFUL and played really well. And despite the fog, the way she looked to mistress for guidance KILLS ME. Its so cute. Im gonna cry. And the cuffs. Ugh. Breathing exercises arent helping. Whew. Time to press on.
Date: 02/27/19 07:54 pm Title: Interlude: First Date
This story continues to make me want to curse a LOT. just So Much.
Admittedly, this casual hookup thing is a bit wierd to me. I dont reaaally undeerstand what she saw in him and i dont understand her character in general. Like its just a teeensy bit too ideal or something.
James on the other hand is Too Real and im Offended.
Date: 01/02/19 03:34 pm Title: Epilogue
I loved this story. I find Victoria's early actions completely reprehensible, but ... all's well that ends well, I guess? I'm also usually not into bimboization or identity death, two huge themes here, but the story is just so well written that I found myself enjoying them anyway. This one's a definite keeper.
Date: 12/26/18 06:06 pm Title: Epilogue
I have to say, maybe because I'm trans and can relate, but I'm really enjoying what seems to be a bit of trend towards guys becoming girls because they *want* to be girls (even if they don't admit to it/ realize it right away). This was a lovely little story, and pretty darn hot to boot.
Author's Response: There was a year-long pause in finishing this story, during which time I finally unpacked some age-old repressed feelings, and came to the conclusion that I'm "not entirely cis." In that regard, this story feels somewhat personal; the two 'halves' of the story bookend the 'before' and 'after' of me coming out to myself. Re-reading the story, I think I can almost see the metaphorical gender gears turning in my mind.
Date: 12/22/18 05:36 pm Title: Epilogue
i can't say i enjoyed this story too much other than from a smut standpoint, my empathy doesn't like forced stuff too much unless there is a happy ending for the original person's free will.... That said, it is clearly marked forced, and the writing is good, so I'm leaving a good review.
I'd love to see consensual non-mind control changing stories around this wonder drug in the future... maybe even with the smut... I could see a whole host of opportunities since it doesn't seem to have any limits.
Date: 12/22/18 04:08 pm Title: Epilogue
Well, thanks for completing ruining the whole story with the last chapter. What the fuck? Can't there be one fucking story on this site that doesnt end with hetero sex? Fucking nasty
Author's Response: I'm so sorry you didn't enjoy it, and it sounds like you had a strongly negative reaction. I understand there are different preferences from all readers. I hope you find satisfaction from the other chapters.
Date: 05/29/18 10:42 pm Title: Prologue
It's awesome please finish. It's awesome please finish. It's awesome please finish. It's awesome please finish. It's awesome please finish. It's awesome please finish. It's awesome please finish.
Author's Response: Endings are hard! I'll try :)
Date: 11/05/17 04:19 am Title: Fourth Vial (Part 2)
Sooo good! Love too see it concluded! /J
Author's Response: Keep an eye out around Christmas time. It's been too hectic to think for the past few months, but I have set aside some time, and I've been taking notes and plan to write another chapter or two during my holiday break.
Date: 09/13/17 04:23 am Title: Fourth Vial (Part 2)
What about that fifth vial???
Author's Response: I know, sorry! I think I hit a minor block, trying to flesh out the last chapter or so. Trust me I'm thinking about it a lot. When I find the set pieces that feel right, the ending is coming.
Date: 08/26/17 01:08 pm Title: Prologue
I'm REALLY enjoying this story and I can't wait to see the next chapter. I do hope that you won't just rush the ending, but instead, let us savor the new life that has been made for our sexy little protagonist.
Well done! And thank you.
Date: 08/08/17 09:03 pm Title: Fourth Vial (Part 1)
My dream come true. This is a great idea and a nice portrayal of a Loving Mistress. Too many stories think domination has to be cruel and mean. There is a romantic side to the dom/sub relationship and you are really doing a great job showing that fact.
Author's Response: I'm really happy to hear that, thanks! I've received a very wide range of feedback on Victoria's character. Some people are absolutely hating her, but I'm personally enamored by her so far.