Date: 07/13/17 12:57 am Title: Chapter 6
I loved part of this actually with the whole former best friends, and how they didnt know it was "him" part, still sadly way too submissive. I would liked it more it was a darker plot, with forced elements, and the guy totally regretting everything, even getting sick of having a dick near his face and then in his mouth suddenly. But still interesting story.
Date: 07/05/17 03:53 am Title: Chapter 9
I loved this story. I couldn't stop reading after I picked it up. We'll written, good characters, and very very smexy. The only thing I think I would critique would be the ending. It seems to me that Elena should have had something to do with Ashley's transformation. Sheven is there at the start, there at theach end, and Ashley turns into the perfect submissive, slutty pet that Elena wants. Maybe that is just me though as I offten find intrigue in stories. I always want stories I like to continue so I can keep reading.
Regardless of my opinions on the ending I loved it and will reread it probably a billion times.
Date: 07/01/17 11:54 am Title: Chapter 9
You wrote a story so close to my own experiences, from meeting a gal that was gay all the way to wanting to belong to someone as their Pet. The words Good Girl and Pet are so ingrained in my desires that it was easy to forget i wasn't Ash. I wish so much I could have this happen to me. It hurts the way I wish this and to see it so closely in print is a gift. Thank You so much.
Date: 06/29/17 01:27 am Title: Chapter 7
You have hit my emotional chords with this story. I have dreamed of something like this being my change. I get turned on by all the ways you are presenting for a good girl. That phrase is also a trigger that has become trained in me through my own journey, so when you use it I get so like Ashley.
Date: 06/10/17 02:48 am Title: Prologue
This is a great little setup and you've done a very good job writing it. I was a bit unsure about the perspective, since that can be really hard to maintain using that sort of voice, but I think you've done great with it. Looking forward to reading more.