Date: 05/27/19 12:17 am Title: Chapter 1
This is a pretty neat story of a trans person finding out their identity. I love the light heartedness mixed in with some juicy events. The characters are likable and the setup of the parents having to leave for some business thing is kinda funny as their kids are left alone, even though they are considered young adults.
Date: 10/11/17 11:16 pm Title: Chapter 1
I had the exact same formatting with my first stories. If you're like me, you wrote in Word and used the default paragraph setting. When you paste it, you lose your paragraphs and that makes it harder to read (I had a lot of complaints). Just go to your document, select all, and change the paragraph setting to zero space in between, then manually add returns after each one. Then it'll look on the site like it does in your draft.
Author's Response: Thanks, I know this was a long time ago, but I'd love to hear your thoughts on the actual story if you wouldn't mind re-reading.