Date: 03/08/19 02:32 am Title: Chapter 14
Oh wow, this excellent tale is apparently just beginning to weave a much longer and more complex tapestry than I might have guessed initially. I'm hoping you eventually reveal if there's some common thread to our protagonist's experiences, a theme or a mission, or if it's just semi-random with him having to experience being her in various contexts. (Which would still be entertaining enough!)
Date: 03/07/19 07:08 pm Title: Chapter 14
Well, at least Travis is getting to meet some famous people throughout history. Better than I made out last time I was out drinking with friends.
I hadn't thought that Travis would move on from Egypt, I think you could have kept her there for a lifetime. So much rich history to explore.
The leap to pirate times should prove interesting for a man turned into a woman pretending to be a man.
I hope the giant forward leap in time and location does not mean Travis is on his way home. You've created a universe where Travis could be anyone from any time period. Sorry, Travis, but I hope you get the best history lesson of all time.
Date: 12/29/18 12:57 am Title: Chapter 13
Thank you, thank you, thank you. I was afraid this story wouldn't be updated anymore.
I love the historical aspect of your writing. I can't wait to find out where and when we are now.
I'm glad to see Travis is still female, it would not have been as interesting if he had become a man again.
Now to find out who is pursuing him, and why. And how.
I'm just so excited to to be reading this story again. Thank you.
Date: 07/09/18 09:38 pm Title: Chapter 1
Wow, I'm loving this story. I've been to Egypt and Rome, so the location and historical aspects give me even more reason to like it.
I don't know where or when 'he' is now (honestly, I've never heard anyone shout "woman overboard") so I'm waiting on the edge of my seat for the next part. Keep up the great work!
Date: 07/09/18 06:53 pm Title: Chapter 12
I'll be very disappointed if he not only does he zip to another time period but into another (esp male) body. The worst thing about these time travel type stories is the constant jumping around. I was really hoping Iset would come to like Caesar but that's just my own personal tastes coming around.
Date: 04/01/18 03:13 am Title: Chapter 10
Captain, we seem to have been sucked into a time dilation. We can try diverting extra power into the plasma manifolds before the warp in space closes. Proceed, jordy. Helm, continue monitoring the handmaiden with long range sensors, If we need to get her out of this tgstorytime chapter we can beam her up.
Hehe. I'm a nerd. Still itching for the big sifi reveal.
Date: 08/13/17 01:12 pm Title: Chapter 5
A very unique story and well done for all the research. It would be good to get to know a little more of the main character's personality, feelings etc to make it a little more captivating. But you have set us up for some potential excitement with the upcoming battle! Will she escape? Will she accidentally change history? Some of the ways I'm trying to predict that the story could go! I'll give you a five as I'd feel bad to leave a four and I can't do 4.5 :)
Date: 06/04/17 01:26 am Title: Chapter 2
Love it! I'd so hate if Iset gets into trouble... It'd be interesting if Iset finds out who did this to her while working for the queen... She must have mentally changed to speak and understand Egyptian as if it were English