Reviews For Heaven Waiting
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Reviewer: Amanda Lynn Signed Report
Date: 06/12/17 01:49 am Title: Chapter 1 Joseph

Well, you beat me to it. I had this one penciled in with a story line, but I have that with about 10 other stories, I got 1 ready to download and another almost. Gotta do it before I see someone else do it.
I love what you did. At the beginning I thought you'd make him become Melissa but I like this way better. Great job.

Reviewer: Portia Bennett Signed starstarstarstarstar Report
Date: 06/05/17 10:14 pm Title: Chapter 2 Melanie

WEll, that brought some tears to my eyes. There was no question as to what was going to happen; however, you did it very nicely.

Reviewer: Roadbandit Signed starstarstarstarstar Report
Date: 06/03/17 02:18 am Title: Chapter 2 Melanie

I like ur ending better,and I seen both movies!

Reviewer: Dcrute Signed starstarstarstarstar Report
Date: 06/02/17 11:59 pm Title: Chapter 1 Joseph

I forgot to add I love the ending you don't see that in tg stories very often

Reviewer: Dcrute Signed starstarstarstarstar Report
Date: 06/02/17 11:55 pm Title: Chapter 1 Joseph

Excellent take off on here comes Mr. Jordan I like Melanie married name Mrs. Farnsworth a clear nod to Mr. Jorden

Reviewer: storylovinggamer Signed starstarstarstarstar Report
Date: 06/02/17 02:01 pm Title: Chapter 2 Melanie

Loved it! This was such a sweet story!

Reviewer: storylovinggamer Signed starstarstarstarstar Report
Date: 05/26/17 01:34 am Title: Chapter 1 Joseph

Wow! A masterpiece! Can't wait to see where it goes!

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