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Reviewer: liltiger Signed starstarstarstar Report
Date: 05/25/17 10:56 pm Title: Miss Abercrombies School for Girls: The Long Week

That was hot. The teasing and sex scenes were great. You made some grammar mistakes though, but that's okay. Keep up the good work.

Reviewer: 930310 Signed starstar Report
Date: 05/25/17 05:57 am Title: Miss Abercrombies School for Girls: The Long Week

What the heck is wrong with this school? Your portrayal of the females is quite demeaning. The spelling and grammar could be improved as well.

Author's Response: You're right, it's messed up. But anything I write is not a representation of reality, just fiction. And I agree my Grammar and Spelling is bad, though some of those might be cultural differences, depending on which English you use. Demeaning isn't the word I'd use though, I've written more than capable female characters in the past, this was just smut, nothing deeper. Though I thought I'd made the reasoning for this one obvious. There's much worse on this site. Thank you for taking the time to leave a review.

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