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Reviewer: Zapper Signed starstarstarstarstar Report
Date: 08/27/18 03:20 pm Title: 1 - The party and a discovery

Nice start. I can't wait to see where this goes next.

Reviewer: junyour Signed Report
Date: 05/16/17 01:11 pm Title: 1 - The party and a discovery

Interesting start. I can only hope it continues

Author's Response: I actually cut out like a quarter of this chapter because it was all just background and I wanted to get down to the premise :,) Sp don't worry there's more >:D

Reviewer: Roadbandit Signed starstarstarstarstar Report
Date: 05/15/17 10:10 pm Title: 1 - The party and a discovery

I like the idea ,but read it somewhere else but not at a party !

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