Reviews For The Cabin
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Reviewer: 930310 Signed Report
Date: 05/15/17 01:17 am Title: Chapter 1

The story needs editing. There are several mistakes in the spelling and some words are used too often.

Reviewer: storylovinggamer Signed starstarstarstar Report
Date: 05/14/17 08:13 pm Title: Chapter 1

A little rough, you should space it out a bit to make it easier to read. Good story overall, though it felt a bit rushed. I'm curious to see how you continue it, as well as improve it in the future.

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