Date: 03/19/18 12:33 am Title: New Friends: Type Three
Wow what a wild ride. Plenty of sexy parts and what an emotional roller-coaster. Well written, well plotted, with plenty of character development . . . my only criticism is that it's marked as a body-swap. It isn't. It's a fantastic transformation story but no one swaps bodies.
Author's Response: You're right - it's not a body-swap. Fixed! Thanks for your feedback!
Date: 09/06/17 06:11 pm Title: New Friends: Type Three
This was so much fun! You caught me off guard with the big surprise but I can see how it all made sense. This and Crush are my favorite sci-fi stories!
Author's Response: I tried to make it a surprise. Glad it worked for you!
Date: 08/26/17 03:44 pm Title: New Friends: Type One
Well done! I am always looking for more of your story!
Author's Response: Just one last chapter to come then we'll say farewell (for now) to Rikki and Starr. I hope you liked meeting Bianca and Plush, though. Their stories are coming!
Date: 08/25/17 08:57 pm Title: The Life I Never Knew I Wanted
I feel like I just commented, but every chapter deserves praise, and seeing as how this is the end...
Fantastic ending. Definitely ended on a great note. Thank you for this.
Author's Response: Thanks. It was a little adventurous but I'm glad it worked for you!
Date: 08/24/17 08:10 pm Title: The Race Car
Excellent ending, no doubt improved further by the coming epilogue. Great job, this shines as an example of one of my favorite stories - and really, one of the only *long* stories that's held my affection all the way through.
Thanks again for this journey!
...Did you plan for it to be exactly 100 chapters?
Author's Response: Journey - that was the right word. I just break chapters where it makes sense, funny how that worked out!
Date: 08/24/17 12:23 am Title: The Equally Fun Twin
> Let me know if you think it's too much.
It's not! I definitely get a thrill when a story has a 'bad' or devilish ending, but this is just as satisfying. It makes me realize how rarely I get to enjoy the end of a good story.
Author's Response: I'm all about the Disneyesque endings - happily ever after!
Date: 08/23/17 09:59 pm Title: Satisfaction
I somehow saw that coming, Chloe. But it is nice to see the two "girls" happy.
Author's Response: You were always one step ahead of me!
Date: 08/15/17 01:18 pm Title: Destiny Date
This is getting fun, Chloe!
Date: 08/12/17 05:27 pm Title: Meet Rikki
Wow, she's beautiful. Lucky Starr, I am envious (giggle)
I just hope they are going to do something to TJ and company, too!
Author's Response: TJ...Oh no, did I forget about what he did? ;)
Date: 08/10/17 05:51 pm Title: The Equally Fun Twin
You're right, Chloe, it is going down my street, it seems. I like the new twist.
Author's Response: A twisted new twist in the end. We'll see what you think.
Date: 08/08/17 01:55 pm Title: Going Away Present
So Rich is staying a she, is he? Interesting.
Author's Response: And, soon enough, you'll get an idea where her preferences are and maybe that'll be something you like. It's, well, a little different. I'm wondering how you'll react!
Date: 08/05/17 02:04 am Title: The Equally Fun Twin
It was too easy for him to get her out of the cell, that's why I thought he was a bad guy.but I'm enjoying the storyline!
Author's Response: Thanks... Maybe I'll re-work that part. I suppose you've guessed what's coming now.
Date: 07/31/17 04:22 am Title: Incomplete Fantasy
I just 'binged' read the whole story so far. I must say I am not a fan of the review process of reviewing each and every chapter so I apologize for the limited reviews. I've read a lot of stories on this site and this one is my fav so far. I don't know what I hope happens and just when I thought I figured out the plot twist it changed. I am a fan, the sex is written well and I await the next chapters
Author's Response: Thanks so much! For those of us who post a chapter at a time, regular feedback can tell us if we're going in the right direction because we're able to change the story along the way (at least that's why I like hearing from readers often). Thanks again and I hope you like where the story goes (it gets a little twisted)!
Date: 07/24/17 05:30 pm Title: Time for a Change
I hope you are not teasing and this is going where I'd like it to go. Keep them coming, Chloe.
Author's Response: Well, like I said, it's a little different.
Date: 07/23/17 05:53 pm Title: Love at Second
God, I'm going crazy waiting for the other shoe to drop. This story is so great. Some of the other stories posted on this site - the other ones which range up in the 50-plus chapters in length - they've never been able to hold my attention like this story does.
Thanks for keeping up with it, I've been impressed at the continued pace.
Author's Response: Oh, there's definitely another shoe... Glad you're enjoying it!
Date: 07/19/17 04:54 pm Title: Date Night
Geeez, they must really have fucked her brains out for her to gulp down all three bottles.
Date: 07/18/17 08:41 pm Title: Waterpark
Wow all 3 bottles together? She is going to get nuts and prolly kill him with all the week long sexy fun hehehe I am sure he will like it and thanks you are back 😘😻
Author's Response: What better way for Rich to repay the man who saved him, right?
Date: 07/04/17 01:51 am Title: Not My Love
I like the storyline,I know TJ set him up to become a woman,I'm just waiting for the other shoe to drop!
Author's Response: I promised I wouldn't give anything away and who's behind Rich's change will be revealed later. But I'm hoping you're going to surprised to learn how all this happened!