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Reviewer: DC1writes Signed starstarstarstarstar Report
Date: 07/18/17 07:59 pm Title: Chapter 5

Really have to say, this story keeps getting better and better, and keeps me reading to very last word. Truely amazing!

Reviewer: spudster Signed starstarstarstarstar Report
Date: 07/10/17 06:22 am Title: Chapter 1

Great story, protagonist should turn into a lizard that eats bugs or something like that idk
It's pretty funny

Author's Response: Thanks for the suggestion! I kinda want to see how far I can go with your "or something" while still keeping to your idea. But don't worry, you'll get your lizard. Maybe.

Reviewer: Faye Kistry Signed starstarstarstarstar Report
Date: 07/01/17 08:08 am Title: Chapter 4

Really good stuff. Entertaining and well crafted, count me in!

Author's Response: Thank you!

Reviewer: Nfsu218 Signed starstarstarstarstar Report
Date: 06/28/17 08:13 pm Title: Chapter 3

So, I just found this story and am wondering what took me so long. I am greatly enjoying this story and can't get enough of all the witty humor. I can't wait to see what else you have in store for us! Thank you for sharing your story with us!

Author's Response: No problem! Thanks for reading!

Reviewer: Clarity Signed starstarstarstarstar Report
Date: 06/26/17 05:05 am Title: Chapter 1

I like this story! Your narration style is very quirky, and I'm curious to see where all of this goes.

Author's Response: Than you!!!! (I really enjoy your writing, so I kinda feel like an anime girl who's been noticed by her senpai).

Reviewer: 930310 Signed starstarstarstar Report
Date: 05/15/17 01:28 am Title: Chapter 1

I like your writing so far. The grammar is good and there is a clear red thread through the first chapter. I hope that this story will be continued.

Author's Response: Thanks! I do have more, and I plan on posting it, but I sorta forgot to do so earlier...

Reviewer: storylovinggamer Signed starstarstarstarstar Report
Date: 05/10/17 12:51 pm Title: Chapter 1

intresting story! made me a laugh a bit!

Author's Response: Thanks a bunch!

Author's Response: Thanks a bunch!

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