Date: 03/11/14 12:00 am Title: Chapter 1
A nicely written story. I have to agree with the reviewer who thinks that additional development would help. What is the state of mind of the transformee while he is being prettied up? And, if he wants to become a "complete woman," why not show him becoming one? What about his wife's motivation for paying for his transformation? Is she a lesbian? Is she two timing him?
Date: 08/27/12 03:14 am Title: Chapter 1
mine is not to reason why...
mine is but to bat my eye... mine is but to wear a dress, never have my hair a mess, wearing pretty bra and panties, sleeping in my frilly scanties, was a man, now a girl, hair all permed up in a curl, now my male self has to go cause she deems it shall be so.