Reviews For Carla
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Reviewer: magisterb Signed starstarstar Report
Date: 03/11/14 12:00 am Title: Chapter 1

A nicely written story. I have to agree with the reviewer who thinks that additional development would help. What is the state of mind of the transformee while he is being prettied up? And, if he wants to become a "complete woman," why not show him becoming one? What about his wife's motivation for paying for his transformation? Is she a lesbian? Is she two timing him?

Reviewer: Maryjane Signed Report
Date: 12/29/13 10:17 pm Title: Chapter 1

Way to go, enjoy!

Reviewer: Robin61 Signed starstarstarstar Report
Date: 01/25/13 07:02 pm Title: Chapter 1

nice sexty story with a wife that get what she will have for a huband

Reviewer: Ole Ulfson Signed starstarstarstar Report
Date: 08/27/12 03:14 am Title: Chapter 1

mine is not to reason why...

mine is but to bat my eye... mine is but to wear a dress, never have my hair a mess, wearing pretty bra and panties, sleeping in my frilly scanties, was a man, now a girl, hair all permed up in a curl, now my male self has to go cause she deems it shall be so.

Ole

Reviewer: Dwere Signed starstarstarhalf-star Report
Date: 04/11/12 06:10 pm Title: Chapter 1

Not bad but fairly predictable. You do write pretty well though, and that by itself makes it worthwhile.

Reviewer: gashe Signed Report
Date: 06/17/11 04:49 pm Title: Chapter 1

Nice story but it moves too quick to enjoy. I'd like to see it fleshed out a bit more.

Reviewer: Patty Signed starstar Report
Date: 03/10/11 10:35 pm Title: Chapter 1

a good story but it needs additional development

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