Reviews For Linda
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Reviewer: Firebate Signed starstarstarstar Report
Date: 07/06/17 10:21 am Title: Linda

I loved the story, but I disliked how the ending played out. My sense of justice demands that a bully not get such a special person without a sacrifice of his own. It bugged me so much, I wrote an alternate ending for the last sentence. Essentially, a shape up if your really interested conversation.
If you are interested in this convoy please let me know. I can either post it in reviews or send it to you for your review.

Reviewer: BobbeNa Signed starstarstarstarstar Report
Date: 04/25/17 02:52 am Title: Linda

I think you did a very good job on this story so when is part 2

Reviewer: oneanonly_kittykat Signed starstarstarstar Report
Date: 04/22/17 11:32 pm Title: Linda

Soloved this story very much .

Much love Kittykat

Reviewer: 930310 Signed starstarstar Report
Date: 04/20/17 07:37 am Title: Linda

What is wrong with that family? There are some inconsistencies in the story as well, Leon's parents are first mentioned to not be in the know and a bit later they are.
The grammar gets a bit messy in some places as well.

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