Date: 07/06/17 10:21 am Title: Linda
I loved the story, but I disliked how the ending played out. My sense of justice demands that a bully not get such a special person without a sacrifice of his own. It bugged me so much, I wrote an alternate ending for the last sentence. Essentially, a shape up if your really interested conversation.
If you are interested in this convoy please let me know. I can either post it in reviews or send it to you for your review.