Date: 04/25/17 02:31 am Title: Chapter 1: Arrival
Now that some light has been shed into the plot, I have to say, the pacing is truly excellent. Keep it up.
In the first few chapters it appeared as if Melody was someone the household could not get rid of for a reason only Karen knows (or only she makes a fuss about, while the rest just accept it), but the last reveal has truly left me perplexed - hope you can explain it! Congratz so far.
Date: 04/24/17 08:12 am Title: Chapter 4: A Night With Melody
Oooh now the speculations can commence! I'm guessing our current "joe" was actually melody, Joe had a little fling with melody and the jealous wife switched their bodies. I know it doesn't say body switch story so I don't know I'm just curious (don't answer me I love surprised) :D
Date: 04/12/17 09:01 am Title: Chapter 3: Fishing Story
Sweet story so far, keep going.
Date: 03/28/17 10:26 am Title: Chapter 1: Arrival
Well, there are several ways this could go, aren't there? I am interested which way you've chosen. Count me among the followers of this story. Well written, too.