Date: 05/29/19 03:35 pm Title: The Gift of Life: A Guide to Elioran Biology
Wow, she knocks him up, then walks! Harsh.
At least he doesn't need to go to school as a pregnant teenager. Or is that the sequel? I noticed they said "eggs," so does this mean he'll keep pumping out babies until he runs out of eggs?
Date: 03/27/17 05:16 pm Title: The Arrival
D'awwwwe baaaaby how cuuuteeee! I wonder how I didn't see this series earlier, this is pretty good. The last line though about5 the doctor motioning to speak but thought better of it. You accidentally put it in twice. My only real critique.
Date: 03/27/17 09:57 am Title: Star Shower
This is interesting, but honestly the characters are confusing. I can't tell who's who, and I don't even know what gender Tora and Nova are, nor... yeah. The rest is good, but all the characters are super confusing to me. They need a bit more explanation than that one vague introduction