Reviews For Dual Journeys
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Reviewer: Lilchelly Signed starstarstarstarstar Report
Date: 09/25/17 08:53 am Title: Chapter 2 - The Blind Journey

I really like this story and I hope it's not abandoned or dead or anything. Also I love the character of Leena, he's so confident in his gender despite what his body looks like or feels like. That's so beautiful!

Reviewer: storylovinggamer Signed starstarstarstarstar Report
Date: 05/15/17 05:42 pm Title: Chapter 2 - The Blind Journey

Interesting story. I didn't really like the shift in point of view though, makes things a bit more confusing... But overall it was a amazing story still, and i look forward to more.

Reviewer: Shadow Dragon Signed starstarstarstarstar Report
Date: 03/18/17 09:38 am Title: Chapter 2 - The Blind Journey

.....AWESOME START!!!! Can't wait for the rest!

Reviewer: DedWards Signed starstarstarstarstar Report
Date: 03/16/17 09:35 am Title: Chapter 1 - The Death of Innocence

I like. Though Ren seems to take the change quite calmly. I understand she has a lot of more pressing matters, but I hope the shock of change isn't ignored completely.

Author's Response: There will be minor shocks here and there, but Ren accepting quickly was very much to contrast Leena not realizing that she's female. ~ Hikaro

Reviewer: DedWards Signed starstarstarstarstar Report
Date: 03/16/17 09:33 am Title: Chapter 2 - The Blind Journey

Very nice. Impatiently waiting for more.

I do have one concern. It's been what? 13 years since the accident that changed Leena to what she is at the moment? Shouldn't she realise she's most definitely female now, or is it stubbornness and / or poor guidance by the elders in the dojo?

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