Date: 09/25/17 08:53 am Title: Chapter 2 - The Blind Journey
I really like this story and I hope it's not abandoned or dead or anything. Also I love the character of Leena, he's so confident in his gender despite what his body looks like or feels like. That's so beautiful!
Date: 03/16/17 09:35 am Title: Chapter 1 - The Death of Innocence
I like. Though Ren seems to take the change quite calmly. I understand she has a lot of more pressing matters, but I hope the shock of change isn't ignored completely.
Author's Response: There will be minor shocks here and there, but Ren accepting quickly was very much to contrast Leena not realizing that she's female. ~ Hikaro
Date: 03/16/17 09:33 am Title: Chapter 2 - The Blind Journey
Very nice. Impatiently waiting for more.
I do have one concern. It's been what? 13 years since the accident that changed Leena to what she is at the moment? Shouldn't she realise she's most definitely female now, or is it stubbornness and / or poor guidance by the elders in the dojo?