This story looks interesting so far, sadly the champers are so short! 1-3 actually could have been just 1 chapter, that would have been fine. Try to write longer chapters that would totally boost the plot. Keep it up.
Reviewer: junyourSignedReport Date: 06/05/17 12:33 am
Title: Chapter 3
I am intrigued by how this is starting and want to see more as your muse permits.