Reviews For Shift
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Reviewer: RachelX Signed Report
Date: 04/10/19 03:16 am Title: Influencers Influencing Influences

Not wanting to sound too harsh, but Austin's lack of interest and appreciation for such mind boggling good fortune is causing me to lose interest. A dream come true, better than winning the lottery situation and he sees it as some kind of misfortune, an unwelcome pain in the ass. And there needs to be some focus on what it is like being a teenage boy who is working as a model for girls clothing; even if he doesn't really care for it. Because I was definitely looking forward to some vicarious enjoyment/wish fulfillment in the details of his work and having (being able) to live part of his existence as a girl. But I look forward to more of the story.

Reviewer: Amanda Lynn Signed Report
Date: 07/07/18 03:52 am Title: Shift

Yay! You're back!

Reviewer: oneanonly_kittykat Signed starstarstarstar Report
Date: 12/24/17 06:28 pm Title: Easy Money

I am so loving this story, just hope you finish it asap

Reviewer: Roadbandit Signed starstarstarstarstar Report
Date: 12/21/17 08:21 pm Title: Easy Money

Very interesting l like where the story is going

Reviewer: Roadbandit Signed starstarstarstarstar Report
Date: 12/20/17 01:02 am Title: Routine

Excellent chapter!

Reviewer: Roadbandit Signed starstarstarstarstar Report
Date: 12/19/17 01:43 am Title: Helping a Friend

I’m glad you started back on the story again.

Reviewer: MageJackie Signed starstarstarstarstar Report
Date: 07/06/17 03:57 pm Title: Shift

Really enjoying this story. Cannot wait for next chapter!

Reviewer: Portia Bennett Signed starstarstarstarstar Report
Date: 06/19/17 08:48 pm Title: Getting Paid

Always enjoyed stories of this genre. I wonder where or what this will lead to?

Reviewer: Roadbandit Signed starstarstarstarstar Report
Date: 06/19/17 09:24 am Title: Getting Paid

It couldn't hurt,there's always time to do one more job.

Reviewer: grabber_blue Signed starstarstarstarstar Report
Date: 04/14/17 02:50 pm Title: New York

Awesome story

Reviewer: Roadbandit Signed starstarstarstarstar Report
Date: 04/06/17 06:26 pm Title: New York

Very interesting !

Reviewer: noodles5 Signed starstarstarstarstar Report
Date: 03/23/17 04:40 am Title: Shift

Phenomenal... really liking what I see. Progression so far is perfect.

Reviewer: ropp86 Signed starstarstarstarstar Report
Date: 03/11/17 05:22 pm Title: Christmas

Like the story so far. Hope it continues for quite awhile.

Reviewer: Emily Signed starstarstarstarstar Report
Date: 03/11/17 05:18 pm Title: Shift

I really hope he actually comes out. I'd love that, story so far is nice.

Reviewer: FaithRomeyer Signed starstarstarstarstar Report
Date: 03/11/17 09:00 am Title: Christmas

I personally would like it better if Austin started putting more emotion in narrating but overall, you're doing pretty well.

Reviewer: Tritype521 Signed Report
Date: 03/10/17 04:14 am Title: Friday

Really liking the story so far, I'm glad the transformation happened soon but didn't jump the shark with him going full on female as soon as possible. Also the writing is really good!

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