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Reviewer: snowangel Signed starstarstar Report
Date: 03/05/17 12:08 pm Title: Chapter 1

Story wasn't to bad. Only thing is you should explain the meaning of some of the words in the story.

Author's Response: Thanks for your feedback next time I will not use non english words.

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